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Jul 25, 2024 at 1:16pm
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Edited: July 25, 2024 at 1:26pm
Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Until yesterday I was having trouble thinking of a pet peeve that was strong enough to torture me in hell. I don't know if this is a "peeve" but it is torture to watch this behavior from afar. I believe in the right of peaceful protest and have done so myself. But NO cause excuses that which I saw yesterday. This is my knee-jerk reaction.

"Hang Them

Another nation's flag
flying in my flag's stead,
the proud stars and stripes
crumpled to ground as if dead.
My country's own children
defiling what I hold dear,
symbols of hard-won freedom
while they jeer and cheer.

Rage and disgust rise
up from my very core.
In despair, I shout, wipe
them from this shore.
                    ~~Judi Van Gorder
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Re: DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 07-22-24 4:36pm
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Re: tracker's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 07-22-24 4:40pm
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Re: Re: tracker's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 07-23-24 6:21pm
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Re: Re: Re: tracker's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 07-24-24 1:21pm
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*Star* Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 07-25-24 1:16pm
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Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 07-25-24 2:02pm
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