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Oct 10, 2024 at 2:07am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality
by JMariah Author IconMail Icon
Dust

a speck of dust
floats
silently
toward the floor,
baring burdens
brushed upon.
A glint of sunlight
catches.
for an instant
it shines,
even sparkles,
inhales the beam
between its fibres
and winks back the light
in sudden flash
of fire.
And then,
becomes dust once more,
floating silently
toward the floor.


JMariah
"Creativity is intelligence having fun"
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DISCUSSION: Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality · 10-07-24 5:43pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality · 10-08-24 11:04am
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*Star* Re: DISCUSSION: Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality · 10-10-24 2:07am
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Re: JMariah's DISCUSSION: Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimen... · 10-10-24 4:09pm
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