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A month-long writing challenge, using The Beatles' songs as inspiration.

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Jun 7, 2025 at 12:31am
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Please Please Me, first week, first entry.
I forgot to add the Re in the former version. Re: First week, Please Please me
Like I've said, I'm brand new here. I'm bound to mess up some. I AM me, just me.
The question remains: Can I belatedly add poems for week one? Writing 7 poems in a day is a little tough.
Here's the first poem again, the second one coming when I had some coffee and calmed the cats yammering for their breakfast.
Please, please come on and try, man.
to stuff arrogance and pry, man
your lips apart,
just say your part
and reply, man.

I know you feel so blue, do
I know you want a poem true,
to steal, to snitch
like for years which
you did so do-do.

But why have I always have to say, say.
and now you want romane's way, way.
You got a poem ever'y day, say
when you just took
what I placed in the book
of all my poem prompts
my poem prompts
Say something, uh, uh.
instead of playing like the fools do
Come on, come on,
Come on, come on
before I disappear into the Big Blue

Come on, come on
Come on, please, please be true
do...

That's it apart from some oh-do's. Guess who is the poem thief? And to top absurdities with absurdities, I'm so deeply woke he must regularly get a stroke. He keeps stealing my poems, though. Lol.
Thanks for the inspiration.
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Please Please Me, first week, first entry. · 06-07-25 12:31am
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Re: Please Please Me, first week, first entry. · 06-07-25 5:11am
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Re: Re: Please Please Me, first week, first entry. · 06-07-25 5:59am
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