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A month-long writing challenge, using The Beatles' songs as inspiration.

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Jun 9, 2025 at 8:16pm
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Re: Beatles Challenge: Twist and Shout - 1; adult version
[ Re:Twist and Shout}
I hope I get this entry thing right now...sorry.
Here's the adult version:

Come on, come on, Baby now
Make me Twist and Shout,
Come on, come on, Baby now
We can work it out.

Come on, come on, Baby now
Whisper sweet nothings, touch my neck
swaying forth and back.
Come on, come on, baby now
How your hazel eyes shine
Your lips are so fine
Put your hand in mine.
Let us become joy devine.

Come on, come on, baby now
Don't quarrel, don't tear
up our tale, be my huggy bear
I've got your soul. Do not fear.
The shivers, the heat, the shared heart,
do not fear, let me show
you how together we can glow.

Come on, come on, baby now
twist and shout,
shake it, shake it babe,
now shake it all out.
be my shambling bear
where hands soft touch does glare,
shake it, shake it, babe, shouting out.
You know you got my going now,
like I knew you would.

Come on, come on, baby now,
you know you move so fine.
Come on, come on, shake it now
Show me how you're mine.
No one's but mine.
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Re: Beatles Challenge: Twist and Shout - 1; adult version · 06-09-25 8:16pm
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