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Re: Form of the week: Shanzi
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My take

River Dawn

​River stones shining,
mist curls above water—

cool shadows linger,
song of a distant heron

echoes in dawn air.
Stillness grows brighter,
day begins its prayer.
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Form of the week: Shanzi · 10-23-25 2:59pm
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