"A Problem Page For All!"

Thanks for sharing, very, very much! I read parts of it last night, in between baking bread and doing homework, and I think the first chapter is notcrappy - it's more organized, intense on character and plot development, and well-paced than anything I'd ever write in such a short time! I wanted to tell you that the name Laralyn is absolutely genius and it suits the character absolutely.

The story is so...grounded! Or something. I feel like mine float 30 feet above the ground in a slightly surreal fashion. Maybe I'm just obsessed with imagery.

But anyway, focusing on your story: what do you think you'll do with it after it's done? How many pages is it? I hope you're eating well and all that to keep the mind's cells juiced and flowing!!