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*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Horror/Scary • Sci-fi
*Penb*  Type:  Script/Play
*Penr*  Request Details:
The correct title is "Achtung! Final Days of the SS Machine Man / Medallion of Synthetic Flesh", but we ran out of characters. All feedback is appreciated

 Achtung! Final Days of the SS Machineman  (18+)
Medallion of Synthetic Flesh
#2366395 by ambrosiusMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Oct 8, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the second part of a novel I'm writing. I struggle with voice and prose. Also, are there any world-building questions that don't make sense? Thanks.

 The Prophecy of Billy: Ch3 & 4  (18+)
This is Part 2 of a novel I'm drafting.
#2366198 by delusionsMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Oct 3, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the first part of a novel. I want to know if my prose is good and if I captured the voice of the MC, who has Down syndrome. Thanks.

 The Prophecy of Billy: Ch1 & 2  (18+)
This is Part 1 of a novel I'm drafting.
#2366197 by delusionsMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Oct 3, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Tragedy • Other
*Penb*  Type:  Draft
*Penr*  Request Details:
Im just wanting to know if my writing style is good, and if the story itself is an interesting read. One thing to keep in mind is it is a horror body horror type book, but any help is appreciated.

 A God Begotten   (13+)
A man named Domnik in a time of sadness goes through an endless hellish loop
#2366136 by mr-begottenMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Oct 2, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Thriller/Suspense • Teen • Fantasy
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the first draft of my latest tale. I'm particularly looking for ways of improving the writing itself without changing any plot points. Don't hold back!

 
WRITING
Beyond the Closet  (E)
Chris is lost in a mysterious wood when he encounters another lost boy.
#2366092 by topherbsdMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Oct 1, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Death • Inspirational • Spiritual
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please be honest with your review. I only write when I'm going through emotions.

 The Person I Remember   (E)
Losing someone to addiction
#2365705 by bikergirl35Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 30, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Thriller/Suspense • Technology • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Delving into writing a suspense short story. Looking for any feedback!

 If I'm Being Honest  (13+)
His texts are now faster, kinder, and perfectly punctuated -- and that's what scares her
#2366069 by cannon1Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 30, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Six hundred words for a quick story about a prisoner on work release with a resounding reveal at the end.

 Rescue me to Prison  (ASR)
Crash landing on work release, our heroine meets an entity from her ancient past.
#2365982 by jotokaiMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 30, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Fantasy • Spiritual
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is a short story I wrote that I'm thinking about expanding to a novella/novel! I wanted to know how it feels to read (is it entertaining? a cool concept? would you read more?) and if there are any glaring issues! Constructive criticism only please!

 Those Who Enter  (13+)
Recalling an eventful night in a monastery, one that haunts to this day. 1468 words.
#2366031 by boxofmyheartMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 30, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Death • Family • Tragedy
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
It's a poem, so only review if you enjoy it.

Otherwise, I want to know your general thoughts about the piece and how it made you feel.

 
WRITING
Grocery List  (ASR)
A grocery list of someone in grief.
#2365920 by jankedymanMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 27, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Emotional • Political
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
I am looking for someone to review this piece thus far, mostly because I am not usually a dystopian writer and this is my first ever attempt. I would like opinions on plot, pacing, style, setting, characters, themes and especially symbolism.
PS. ongoing

 On Contemplating The Face of Another   (13+)
A French boy fights medical racism in dystopian Germany using illicit literature and art
#2364780 by antigoneisgoneMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 16, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Family • Holiday • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Would love some feedback on this flash fiction piece set at a family party!

WRITING
Día de Reyes  (ASR)
A search during a family holiday
#2330723 by casuconsultoMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 10, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Relationship • Teen • Personal
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
I wrote a poem when I broke up with my first boyfriend :)

 
WRITING
I don't know you  (13+)
My final act of clarity
#2364601 by iv0076Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Sep 1, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Supernatural • Death
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hi!
I’d really appreciate any feedback on my latest short story. You’re also very welcome to share your interpretation of the story. Thanks !

Word count: 1,444
Genre: Horror

 The Salon   (13+)
A girl goes to a salon for a hair wash, and leaves with an odd longing.
#2363979 by neillaricMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 30, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Teen • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Any typo's or errors that I haven't noticed. English-English.

 Ch 3 The Wedding.  (18+)
Scouse Les is not happy.
#2363937 by brucefMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 25, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Travel • Action/Adventure • Comedy
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I'm entering this in the Official contest. Is it interesting? Are there any typos or other errors I might've missed? Any feedback welcome! Thanks!

 Sightseeing, Mehta Style  (ASR)
A 'trip' with my husband and son!

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 15, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Mystery • Thriller/Suspense
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Why is their sun getting closer to them? That’s just one of the questions that the Junceans want to know. They also want to know how they can survive the fireballs hitting their planet, and what they can do to stop this from happening.

 Underground Communities  (18+)
They can’t live on Junce right now. That’s because their sun is destroying them.
#2363306 by spacefactionMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 10, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  LGBTQ+ • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
looking for someone to critique my writing flow and style and give some feedback on how they might want the plot to progress!

 knee-deep in red dawn: #1  (13+)
Teenagers find love, friends and their identities. But not for long.
#2363241 by soitairxMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 9, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Cultural • None
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
haiku, 7-5-7, Please review. All review would be appreciated! Thank you.

 Beginnings  (E)
Beginnings of new life, Haiku
#2363180 by scotty1615Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 7, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Mystery • Thriller/Suspense
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
My latest Short Story may look like one long Short Story with only one Section/Part. It’s not only one Part/Section. After all, this isn’t a continuous Short Story. It takes a lot of talks if Gregon wants to help Shairna with what she has tried to do.

 Now, Everyone Knows Who I Am  (18+)
The Council thinks Shairna needs help after what she has done. This includes Shairna.
#2363044 by spacefactionMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Aug 4, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Friendship • Psychology • None
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hey, this is a short piece of flash fiction. I would really appreciate constructive criticism and feedback!

 Bethany's home   (E)
A caretaker tries to learn more about the woman she cares for.
#2362297 by boisestateMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jul 18, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Mystery • Drama • Spiritual
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Over 4k words, the longest story I've written in a while. It blew up unexpectedly, turning into a somewhat absurd mystery drama. It needs further development, for sure. Just thought I'd put it out here. Any thoughts welcome, and thank you!

WRITING
The Assonance of Faith  (13+)
Of war crimes, double lives, mistaken identity, and exes in Texas...

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jul 14, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Community • Cultural • History
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
I promise it will be worth your time:)

 Serpent lies...  (E)
How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering?
#2110735 by maximus1233Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jul 1, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Mythology • Inspirational • Community
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Please review. Will be worth your time!

 Insert title here  (E)
Free your mind
#2105379 by maximus1233Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 28, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  None • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Other
*Penr*  Request Details:
I just made this and i wanted to know what people think (Its a poem)

 
WRITING
ideas that are cool  (E)
cool shizzle that I don't want to forget
#2361313 by around-da-fireMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 25, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Mythology • Emotional • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Looking for a some honest feedback; trying some new writing styles out of late

Where No Horn Calls  (13+)
In Valhalla, after tales of battle, Odin calls upon a child to speak
#2361184 by cannon1Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 24, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Political • Tragedy • Personal
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
A poem I'm looking for an in-depth critique on. Written in AAVE.

WRITING
Boulevard   (E)
Written in AAVE (African American Vernacular English).
#2361274 by jankedymanMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 24, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Parenting • Family • Adult
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
I haven't published any item since the creation of my WDC account. In celebration of my WDC account reaching its anniversary, I've released a poem. It would be great if anyone would check it out

 
WRITING
Why Don't Adults Cry?   (13+)
A celebratory poem for my WDC account reaching its anniversary.
#2361120 by iv0076Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 21, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Environment • Folklore • Fantasy
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Here's a nice and short story. Please give me some tips to improve my prose. I'm a beginner and am looking for some advice. Thank you!

 The Arrival of Summer  (E)
A bit of writing practice.
#2360927 by a.aaronMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 17, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Emotional • Relationship
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Recently updated after sitting shelved for years.

 Seasons Change  (E)
Collection of related stories
#1316368 by wwhartonMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 16, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hi there! Looking for some feedback. Happy to do a review of something of years of comparable length in exchange. Thank you!

 There Is No Love Here  (13+)
8-word prompt: elegy, obsidian, margin, origami, deepen, gnaw, wheeze & lacerate.
#2351752 by elizjohn2000Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 16, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Political • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hi there! Looking for some feedback. Happy to do a review of something of years of comparable length in exchange. Thank you!

 There Is No Freedom Here  (13+)
Based on an 8-word prompt, words highlighted in the text
#2352859 by elizjohn2000Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 16, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Supernatural • None
*Penb*  Type:  Fiction
*Penr*  Request Details:
Hi. Posted this item last year. Following bits and pieces from critiques received here I have made some changes. Would request new reviews and re-reviews if any of you are so inclined. Many thanks.

 A Day in the Park  (13+)
Originally started from a prompt. Updated following critiques from here. TY.
#2346759 by wwhartonMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 11, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Action/Adventure • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I am considering continuing on with this, as with all of my short stories. Please let me know what you think. I will review for you, in turn.

 
WRITING
Drago's Illusion  (13+)
Give not the appearance

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 1, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • Drama • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I am thinking of making this into something longer. Please share what you think on what I have so far.

 
WRITING
Making of a King  (13+)
Scouting Mission

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Jun 1, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Family • Melodrama • Animal
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Honest comments on what feelings, if any, were evoked. Please describe them. Thank you.

 
WRITING
The Waiting Game  (E)
Amidst the chaos of longing, Maya discovers the beauty of patience.
#2357609 by criperMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: May 28, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Supernatural • Dark • Drama
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I'm looking for feedback on a 3.8k word short story I am submitting to an anthology soon. I am hoping for some spelling/grammar feedback as well as content.

There is no sex and no gore. There is profanity and some references to religious practices.

 A Rosary of Demons  (13+)
Henry is teaching his son the business of keeping demons. Submission: The Book of Demons
#2359848 by forgivenessMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: May 25, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Emotional • Family • Melodrama
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
This is the first time I have tried something like this and wondered if the story is understood. Kind wishes, Tee

WRITING
The Ballad of Violet Gray  (E)
Poetic story of Violet Gray. Her story of loss and pain.
#2359871 by teegateMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: May 24, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Dark • Fantasy • Teen
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
hi!! my name is Raine, I would love if someone could just let me know if this story sounds good, and what I should add for interest wise!!

 
WRITING
Chapter 1, start of my Novel REWRITTEN!  (18+)
I rewrote my chapter 1 for my Novel!!! NOTE GRAPHIC! BLOOD DECAPITATION A
#2359155 by raineeMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: May 19, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Fantasy • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
I just want to know if this is an engaging and easy to process opening to an epic fantasy novel, and if it makes you want to read more

 Vengeance, Far Son Chapter 1  (18+)
A mercenary captain, a captured raider, beneath a new red star, heralding a new king.
#2359482 by inklyascensionMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: May 18, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Gothic • Fantasy • Supernatural
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Seeking honest critiques/reviews for this chapter in my novel, In the Valley of the Moon.

 In the Valley of the Moon chapter 2  (18+)
Junie’s mysterious arrival begins stirring whispers, curiosity, and destiny.
#2359177 by pennysueMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: May 11, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Thriller/Suspense • Action/Adventure • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
And the prologue, see if it grabs your attention and makes u want to know what the heck has happened

 Sicilian Dragon Prologue  (E)
After some years way, I’ve decided to give the first chapter of my novel another go
#2357199 by mattlawrence73Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Apr 26, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Thriller/Suspense • Action/Adventure • None
*Penb*  Type:  Chapter
*Penr*  Request Details:
Back after a long break, let me know whether to continue Bishop’s story.

 Chapter 1 reworked The Sicilian Dragon   (E)
Chapter 1 reworked
#2357499 by mattlawrence73Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Apr 26, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Religious • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Novella
*Penr*  Request Details:
I am looking for honest feedback on if this story (Christian fiction) flows well. I know there are details that need to be worked on and added. Any helpful feedback or ideas to add are appreciated!

 The Wrong Covenant (Working Title)  (E)
A Christian fiction story where tragedy opens to triumph. Novelette rough draft .
#2358086 by eightMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Apr 24, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Arts • Biographical • Personal
*Penb*  Type:  Poetry
*Penr*  Request Details:
a freeverse. is it readable?

WRITING
Latitude: 52.079984 | Longitude: 4.31134  (13+)
3 verses, 1 poem

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Apr 17, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Friendship • Drama • Experience
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
Is it interesting? Does it meet the prompt (mentioned in the brief description)? Are there any typos I've missed? Any feedback welcome!

 Foot In Mouth  (13+)
"Experience is simply the name we give our mistakes." — Oscar Wilde

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Apr 13, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Political • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I've not written for five years and then this just bubbled up out of nowhere. I really am looking for honest review, but to be totally truthful, I'm also hoping people will enjoy it... something that might provoke thought and ruffle feathers, as it were.

 Birds of a Kind  (13+)
An exploration of the power of kindness.
#2356877 by writethewritteMail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Mar 31, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  None • None • None
*Penb*  Type:  Novel
*Penr*  Request Details:
First two Chapters of my novel for consideration and critique.

 Tee  (18+)
Chapter 1 -2: Once high-powered attorney who falls on hard times after an office shooting
#2352851 by nelsonjedi1986Mail Icon

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Mar 29, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Cultural • Finance
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
My first short story after a long haitus. Review is truly appreciated.

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#2356718 by Not Available.

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Mar 28, 2026

*BookStack3*  Genre(s):  Drama • Mystery • Thriller/Suspense
*Penb*  Type:  Short Story
*Penr*  Request Details:
I started this without any clear idea of where it would end up. A spy story? Maybe... Any thoughts appreciated.

WRITING
The Laughing Frog  (E)
Matthew, bless his soul, spends his nights at a bar...

*Box*  Not reviewed
posted: Mar 6, 2026

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