This choice: Su finally stops laughing long enough to get up and show Keitaro her mouth. • Go Back...Chapter #6Su swallowed by: chaos   Keitaro wanted to be mad at Su for scaring the bejesus out of him, but he didn’t have the energy to feel anything but tired. He had been hit into low earth orbit twice by Naru and the day wasn’t even half over. He’d come to Su’s jungle like room in search of Shinobu, who had been missing for the last half an hour. When Keitaro had found the girl unconscious in the middle of the floor his first reaction was to check to see how she was doing, however before he could Su had leapt out at him like a wild animal and scared him half to death. Looking at the excited girl, Keitaro suddenly felt a bad feeling coming on. Something about the glint in her eyes was putting his hair on end.
“Is there something I can help you with Su,” Keitaro asked politely. He just hoped that the conversation didn’t end in him being punted out or blow away; most of his conversation with Su ended in that way.
“I got stretchy lips,” Su proudly proclaimed with a big smile beaming at the confused landlord.
“Stretchy lips?” Keitaro repeated trying to understand what Su could be possibly talking about. The girl made little sense to Keitaro, not because of her broken Japanese, but because of her actions. She would say one second that she liked Keitaro and in the next instant drop kick him to the head. Maybe she had multiple personalities or some other kind of personality problem that made her so weird, but over time, Keitaro has come to think that Su is just plain out of the ordinary. How else could you explain all of the bizarre inventions that she came up with every week?
“Yah, stretchy lips. See?” And Keitaro did see. He saw Su put two fingers into ether side of her mouth and pull her mouth until he couldn’t see her eyes over the huge gapping hole that was her mouth. Her mouth was stretched so far out that all Keitaro could see was her huge open mouth and the big dark hole at the back of it. In shock, Keitaro stumbled back, forgetting that Shinobu was lying right behind him. His feet hit Shinobu’s side and he began to lose his balance. Not wanting to tumble back and land on Shinobu and get into one of his unlucky compromising positions, he desperately swung his arms around in an attempt to keep from falling. After a second of wobbling he managed to keep from falling, instead he went lurching forward. He looked in front of him and saw that he was falling towards Su, right into her wide-open mouth. He screamed as he went headfirst into Su’s wet maw.
Su couldn’t see past her wide spread lips, so it came as a complete shock when she felt something get lodged in her mouth. She let go of her lips and her mouth enclosed over Keitaro’s entire head. Seeing what was inside her mouth came as a complete surprise to Su, why would Keitaro put his head inside her mouth? Su might have been a genius, but she was also very immature and to her uncomplicated mind, there could only be one reason to why Keitaro was up to his neck inside her mouth. He had to be doing this because he wants to help Su see how much her body could hold. Keitaro had to be volunteering himself as her guinea pig. It was touching how much he wanted to make Su happy, it would only be right if she let him continue with the examination. Su happily licked over Keitaro’s face and sighing deeply at the taste. Muffled yells for help start to erupt from inside of her mouth, all of them cut short as a wet tongue slathers over Keitaro’s face. Keitaro begins to flail his arms around in an attempt to stop Su. She of coarse thinks Keitaro is just losing his balance and stops his movement get a good hold of his arms and pushing them to his side to keep him from falling. With one very loud and wet swallow, moving Keitaro’s head to the back of her gullet, his neck moving into her hot maw and his shoulders pressing up against her lips. Keitaro’s shrieks for help got even louder as he feels his entire head being sucked on, covered in copious amounts of saliva, making his head slide easily to the back of Su’s mouth. All his noise is gone unnoticed by Su as she continues along his body contentedly.
His shoulders slowly press into her mouth and soon enter the maw, puffing out her cheeks as she opens wider to take them in. Giving another slow swallow to work a bit more of Keitaro into her, his head moves into her neck, bulging it out and making his form appear in her long elegant gullet. The top part of Keitaro’s chest slid in easily, his pecks moving inwards as Su leaned her mouth forward. Her tongue snaked out of her mouth to lick over even more of the older man’s form. Drool leaked from the corners of her jaws, causing the drops to flow down across Keitaro’s back. She giggled gleefully around Keitaro as she took another gulp, sliding Keitaro’s stomach into her mouth and licking that over a few times. Keitaro cried out a few more times, hoping that he may get a response, but all his cries became more muffled as Keitaro slid deeper inside of Su. His shoulders slide past the esophagus and into the throat, making a nice bulge in Su’s neck as his head moved towards her chest. He knew he was inching his way to the hungry stomach, which growled loudly a few more times, letting Keitaro know how close he was. Su no longer had to restrain or as she thought ‘help’ Keitaro now that he was fully held in place as more of his body was swallowed. He wiggled his fingers and tried to find something to take hold of, but found nothing that he could hold onto. With another loud wet gulp, Su tilted her head back a little, rolling Keitaro’s stomach all the way into her mouth followed by his waist.
The Keitaro shaped bulge travels down the foreign girls neck, as his toes wiggle about as Keitaro thighs slowly inch their way into the moist maw. As Keitaro disappears down the slick passageway, he can’t help but wonder what the hell will happen when he gets to the stomach. Will he be digested or will his immortality keep him alive. As he slides down another few inches, he really hopes for the latter. His vague wiggling form can still be seen from the outside, more of his body moving into the tight stomach. His head, followed by his shoulders and chest are soon dumped into the stomach. Keitaro falls flat on his head resting it on the bottom of the stomach. He groans as he feels the top part of his head submerged in a thick liquid already in the stomach, mostly drool at the moment. But quickly becoming something else. With only Keitaro feet remaining, Su takes a breath through her nose and swallows hard. One final gulp from Su made the finishing bulge travel down her neck and disappear into her chest, only to reappear as a swelling shape in her stomach. Keitaro plopped into the stomach and felt himself be pushed into a tightly compacted ball by the grinding gastric lining. Juices swim around him, but give him enough room to breath. Keitaro tries to move but he can’t. trapped, in the dark, and with no idea if he’s going to be part of Su, Keitaro waits for his fate I silence.
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