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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Sci-fi · #1104232

A weekend vacation in the tickle city goes... wrong?

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Chapter #7

Swim with Rachel

    by: Ella M Author IconMail Icon
"Fine."

"YAY!" Rachel exclaimed "Come on are you up for some skinny dipping?"

Without waiting for an answer she stripped off all her clothes and started to pull off yours. You didn't protest and Rachel was after all very pretty.

"Come on!" She said as she pulled you into the water. She kept pulling you into the water until it was up to your neck.

After about a minute Rachel slyly put her arm on your shoulder. She slowly worked her arm down until it was right at your at your slit. She then slowly started to rub it in a way that extremely tickled.

"Rachel y-y-you p-p-prom-is-ised!" You said between giggles.

"No I didn't, I promised the water wouldn't tickle you." She said as her other hand came up to tickle your breasts."

"Haha RACHEL Ahah! ST- HAHA-OP!"

"Never!" She replied with a evil grin.

Well I guess it could always be worse. You thought to yourself. At least it's only her this time.

"Oh, but it's not!" She laughed. She whistled a strange note and all of a sudden you could see fish coming towards you.

The fish were all shapes and sizes but what was strange about them was they all had feathers growing out of their sides.

"You see in Tickleopolis all the fish have feathers instead of gills!" Rachel whispered in your ear.

Suddenly all the fish that had been circling you up to this point lunged in and started to rub against you. Every part of your body was now being tickled and this torture went on for at least an hour.

Eventually the torture stopped except for Rachel was still tickling you.

This time the mirror did not materialize but you could feel the III being put on your chest.

You have failed yet again.

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