This choice: I'll take the low road you'll take the high one • Go Back...Chapter #5A good licking by: Unknown There you stared into your eighteen year old brother Jack's maw as his foul morning breath made you struggle to breathe. You rather put up with his feet then be stuck in that dark abyss of a mouth. Jack saw you staring into his maw and couldn't help but smile. "I guess taking a bath in my maw is a bit to harsh but I do like a good foot message in the morning," Jack smiled. Making up his choice, life around turned into a blur again. Soon you were were left off onto the ground before you brother's titanic paws.
His paws were close to human if it wasn't for the long claws, the pink paws under and the fur on top. Not wanting to spend your time studying this titan's feet, you started running as you heard laughter all around you. "Jeez bro, I can't even tell if you are running," he mocked as he watched you running barely making progressed from his feet. His one little toe can crush a whole block with ease but you kept on running. Five minutes later you were out of strength when you fell hard.
"Awww...don't tell me that's all the progress you can do," Jack's annoying voice ranged in your head. If there is one thing you know now is that you two are pretty much how two brothers are but a bit more extreme. Flipping over on your back, you faced Jack giving you a toothy smile.
"Screw you, you ass," you cursed but he continued to smile. "I'm telling mom for this," you threatened thinking who ever your mother is that she'll teach Jack a lesson.
"Oh really...I was thinking of just a foot rub but now you got to lick my pads and between the toes. And through the whole progress you'll remind me how tasty my feet are and you are glad that you have such a honor," Jack described your punishment as his right foot left the ground. Watching the pink flesh of his foot raise above you, you couldn't help but imagine being crushed by billions of flesh with an easy step.
You laid their frozen while he flexed his foot and wriggled his toes. You stared into the large folds of flesh you will easily be lost in without a trace. You won't be surprised if a small village lived between each individual toe. Theres a better chance of that happening then it being clean and tidy. "I see you are enjoying the view...well let me give you a close up," just like that it fell upon you.
All you could do is raise you hands as if it would stop by magic. But nothing that big can be stopped with a easy will. Luckily your brother can as the sole of his foot stopped from a mere inch away from you face. "I don't feel any licking or hear any compliments," Jack said as you forced your self to comply. Sticking away your pride, your tongue escaped your lips and made contact with his sole.
"What is that suppose to be...unless you want to end up sleeping in my running shoes after my nightly jog. You better do better," Jack threatened backing up his words with his voice alone. Hearing this sent you into a licking frenzy as you ignored the horrible taste. You continued licking as you paused from the sound of his toes scraping aginst the floor in pleasure.
"Heh...why you stop bro. You are doing a great job unless you want to compliment the taste of my feet," Jack voice vibrated through your bones as you start thinking of words that can keep him happy.
"Oh my powerfully brave brother who is better then me in every way...you feet are those to die for," you sugar coated with everything on top.
"Well, well...you finally realized your place little brother. I knew I'll soon crack you if you are sleeping in this bed with me," Jack chuckled.
"Oh brother," you sighed under your breath.
"For such a good compliment...I'll give you the honor to snack between my big toe and the one next to it," Jack replied as you watched thousands of feet of pink flesh pass in front of you. Finally you face was free of the pink wall as his foot finally fell softly inches away from your on feet. Taking a good whiff, the smell was pretty horrible as you a wall of dried sweat appear to be in front of you.
"Oh god," you stared in disbelief. You can finally see your brother's smiling face with the walls of his toes blocking the view of the rest of his body. You couldn't believe how vast your brother is since his head stood up in the heavens.
"Well little bro start eating," he orders down at you watching your every move.
"Just for one little thing I have to go through this," you yelled up upon your feet. You felt silly as if you were just merely yelling up into the heavens. Sadly you brothers face was occupying it.
"What do you mean...I been putting up with your slick month all week," he yells back in anger.
"And what you couldn't think of a good come back," you yelled back up pissed.
"Does it matter...you're still going to-," Johnathan cut himself off when he heard the door knocking.
"Boys...what's going on in there...open this door," a female voice yelled through. Yo couldn't help thinking that this must be your mother.
"I guess your safe for now...if you don't say a thing I'll forgive you and you'll won't have to eat between my toes," Jack said down to you.
"Oh really...I want retribution for this," You yelled back folding you hands to prove a point.
"Find...anything but don't tell mom," you bargained as the walled of his toes were removed from around you. You then spied your brother's titanic foot land with a boom a few miles off. You can only say wow under your breath as you think of how small you are compared to this being. How can you be remotely connected to this godlike wolf who has to struggle just from not crushing you.
Once he grabbed you carefully with his thumb and his index finger. You soon was dropped in the middle of his right hand as you took a seat. Closing your eyes as the wind whipped aginst your face, your brother soon was unlocking the door and opening it. You couldn't believe your eyes for what is the sight before you.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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