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our lil shy ninjas day gets big!

This choice: First, Hinata seeks out Naruto again to celebrate her further ascension  •  Go Back...
Chapter #15

Sorry for Putting You on Hold

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Before anything else, however, she had an appointment to keep.

I did tell him I would be right back, Hinata mused, gazing fondly at her sandals as she daintily wiggled her toes. An extremely colossal growth spurt is no excuse for going back on one's word. It's only too bad that Naruto-kun can't see me in my new beauty. I'm sure he'd be struck speechless!

She chuckled as she readied the seals for her family's distinctive jutsu. "Byakugan!" Within moments, she was focusing again on the space between her toes, zooming in on the ridiculously microscopic Earth and her village... and much more quickly than previously, despite the enormous change in relative sizes. Just another sign that my abilities have grown stronger, Hinata considered, as the Hokage monument burst into view for the second time. One cursory sweep later and the whiskered blond ninja was spotted in their little clearing from before... where apparently his natural restlessness got the better of him. Hinata couldn't help but grin at the sight of her most beloved little person darting about the clearing, sparring with dozens of clones to stave off his boredom and frustration. Truly, it was a shame to interrupt his incredible show of skill and ingenuity.

[Naruto-kun.]

The whiskered ninja stumbled, colliding with three shadow clones and disappearing in a massive puff of dispersed chakra before tumbling out of the dogpile alone. He blinked, shook his head for a moment, then turned to stare at the stars again. [Eh? Hinata-chan?]

The galaxy-sized kunoichi giggled, a deeper throatier sound that sent twinges of excitement coursing through the tiny young man. [Yes, I'm back. Sorry for making you wait so long.]

[Ah, um, yeah...] Naruto eloquently replied, gingerly climbing to his feet while trying to manage the swelling sensation coming from below. [It... well, you didn't take all that long or anything... Did you take care of, um, whatever it was you needed to do?]

Another giggle. [Ah... yes, that.] Hinata smiled warmly at the blond, her body flush at the thought of her super growth orgasm. [I most certainly did, and I was extremely well rewarded for all my efforts.] She stretched languidly, relishing the delectable feeling of her impressive curves shifting and touching her restrictive inadequate clothing. [The solar system was simply doing too good a job massaging my toe, and I grew extremely excited indeed. So very hot and tingly... I just couldn't stand it. I had to bare myself to the universe and join in. That was rather exciting, presenting my womanhood to the entire solar system... even if no one else could really see. But no matter, I had work to do! Not much, mind you; as I said, the solar system had done a fantastic job keeping me on the brink of ecstasy. Just a few moments of self-stimulation... rubbing and teasing and pinching and thrusting... and I was gushing like a fountain, my whole body humming with that wonderful orgasm. But it didn't stop there! Another orgasm followed the first, and then another, and another... Wave after wave of pleasure poured over and through me. I screamed and shook, the feeling driving me mad! It... oh, it was just too tremendous to properly describe. Do you know what I mean, Naruto-kun?]

The blond wide-eyed ninja, his face a bright cherry red, mutely shook his head.

Hinata smirked, bemused. [It would be tough for you to empathize, I'll admit. I wonder how many of the other girls down there have even felt a rush so wonderful. And yet, this was just the appetizer...]

[Appetizer?]

Hinata nodded, biting her lip as she wrapped her arms around her massive breasts, hugging them tight. [Yes. The main course was yet to come... And what a glorious feast it was! Because there was one more orgasm waiting for me, one more rush of the divine. And when this last orgasm hit, well, I simply exploded. I grew! With each wave of pleasure I grew bigger and bigger, large enough to reach the nearest stars! And I absorbed them too, just like I did our sun! Hundreds of stars, and the larger I became the more I could absorb, until I'd grown larger than the entire galaxy! You do know what a galaxy is, don't you, Naruto-kun? And then-]

[Wait wait wait!] Naruto's voice cut through, desperate concern tainting his thoughts. [You got even bigger?!]

[Yes I did,] Hinata instantly responded, smooth as velvet.

[But... but that just makes it worse! I mean, I can't use that jutsu at all! How... how can we ever be together if you just keep on growing?!]

[I'm not sure, Naruto-kun. Right now, I think this is the best we can manage.]

The blond blinked, staring skyward as if he'd suddenly tasted something awful. ["The best we can..." Hinata-chan? What... Why... You're acting different, Hinata-chan...]

[Well, I am different, Naruto-kun,] the galactic ninja-turned-goddess replied, much more soothingly. [This last growth spurt changed me more than just my size. I've developed in places. I'm taller, fuller... oh if you could see me now! You'd probably faint! And... I think there's something else too. New abilities, or talents, or knowledge, or something, just waiting for me to discover! I can sense it, like forgotten memories just out of grasp...]

[Stop talking like that! You're starting to scare me, Hinata-chan!]

Hinata smiled, focusing once again on the unnerved, depressed love of her life. [I'm sorry, Naruto-kun. I certainly don't mean to frighten you. I know I've changed, that I'm becoming something more than just a ninja... just a human... But despite everything, I know I'm still me! My feelings for you are as strong as they've ever been! Out of everyone on Earth, you're the one I cherish above all others! Nothing that happens to me will ever change that! I will always love you, Naruto!]

The blond ninja blushed bright red once again, but Hinata sighed with relief as his tense posture relaxed somewhat. [You... you mean it, Hinata-chan?]

[Absolutely, Naruto-kun.]

He closed his eyes for a long moment, mulling that fact over and over, before blowing out a large puff of frustrated air. [Okay, Hinata-chan. I believe you.] He grinned nervously, his eyes not quite closing. [I... guess we'll just have to chat like this from now on. I... it's not the greatest, but at least I know you're still there.]

Hinata nodded, though she smiled as a thought occurred to her. [Well, we might not be limited to this. I have a feeling that whatever power is waiting for me will help us out tremendously. I have no idea what I'll be able to do, but perhaps I could even grow you myself! Wouldn't that be great?]

Naruto smiled. [Right. And, of course, you'll probably have to grow again just to find this power, eh? You must hate that.]

[Oh, I do! It's positively the worst thing in the world!]

The two shared a brief chuckle, even if Naruto's was still a little strained. Shrugging his shoulders, he leaned back and offered a halfhearted thumbs up. [Well, do what you must, Hinata-chan. Good luck.]

[Thanks, Naruto-kun.] The galaxy-sized goddess kissed her two longest fingers, focusing on the whiskered ninja, and pushed as much love as she could through their mental connection. [You take care as well.]

Like a million ton weight, her thoughts and feelings slammed into the microscopic ninja. At once his body flushed, his eyes crossed, and his pants tented. A colossal vacant grin split his face, and after a couple listless sways, he collapsed bonelessly on his back.

Hinata giggled, certain she'd finally gotten her feelings through to him.

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1. Hinata resumes her universal growth

2. Something else in the village attracts her attention

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