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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1515290

Another take on the headswapping theme, w/an older main character & written in 3rd person.

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Long legged sales woman and a nervous 20 year o...

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Frank and John decided to stick around a bit longer. In the meantime as they watched the mother walk away with the hot daughters body and boyfriend, and the daughter as the new mother talking with her new husband on the phone, new customers entered the shop and browsed the around the store.

“Hey, look at him”, Frank said and pointed to a nervous and somewhat nerdy looking 20 year old boy dressed in Jeans and a dark blue jacket who checked out the women’s lingerie section. Frank and John watched a fashionable long legged sales woman approaching and offering him her help. The brothers overheard the boy telling the sales woman that he wanted to buy something nice for his girlfriend’s birthday. “Hehe, I give him his own panties with long shapely legs and all” said John waving with the remote, but his brother Frank calmly put his hand on the remote and pushed John’s arm down slowly.

“Let’s do something more fun”, Frank said thoughtful to John. “Let me have the remote, I show what I mean”. “Ok, but what will you do Frank” asked John, “Wait and see..” responded his brother and smiled mischievously.

The sales woman and the nerdy boy had found a cheap looking set of underwear and headed to the cashier where an obviously wealthy middle aged couple, perhaps in their forties, where already waiting. John and Frank overheard the man, who was dressed smartly in a blue shirt, an almost black designer suit, black leather shoes and a manly coat, saying to his wife, who sported an stylish shoulder long hairstyle, that “Finally we get some service” as he looked a bit irritated. His elegant, shapely and obviously well endowed wife, was dressed in a black-white checkered female business suit, white satin blouse, black hose, shiny black high heels and a very stylish knee long dark brown mink coat. “I bet she is a trophy wife that doesn't work, just shopping expensive clothing, and he’s some sort of CEO of a multinational company”

John suggested. “Let’s swap the heads now”, John insisted. “Wait, wait….” said Frank as he made clear that he had everything under control.

The woman in the brown mink fur handed over an expensive set of white satin bras and panties to the saleswoman who had positioned her behind the cashier desk. The boy stood nervously waiting after the rich couple and tried to hide his goods for his girlfriend while humming some song to himself. The woman in the fur coat opened her brown designer purse and took out her wallet of the same brand and handed her credit card over to the saleswoman.

“I show you now said Frank” and pointed the remote in the direction of the four people at the cashier and he fired, first at the boy and then at the trophy wife. After a flash of light they saw that they had swapped hair. The wife, the boy and even the saleswoman and husband just went on as nothing had changed. The wife now had a brownish short hair and a bit of beard stubble, and the boy had the wife’s shoulder long blond swept back hair. “Cool said John” and laughed at the sight, “but is that all”. “They should not just have each other’s hair, but all of each other’s hair” and John now saw that the boy had some unusual arched and narrow eyebrows and longer eyelashes.

“Haha, Let’s swap something with the sales woman and the husband”, John suggested eagerly. Frank pointed again and after the flash, “WHAT!, no change?” John expressed disappointed. “No, no,” look at the faces, said Frank, and they both saw how the wife had lost all color in her face, and the nerdy boy now had deep burgundy red lips, expertly made eyes, and long red manicured nails. “This is to funny” the brothers cooed, but John was still not that impressed with Franks performance. In the meantime, the wife bit nervously on her nails while waiting.

“Let’s go some step further with experiment Frank said and see how it develops”. The saleswoman was nearly done with handling the wife’s purchase as she got a call on the intercom.” I need to hurry”, said Frank and pointed the remote again towards the boy and the wife, and suddenly stood the boy dressed in resized versions of the woman’s white satin blouse, black checkered business skirt and jacket, black hose, black shiny high heeled pumps, the luxury wife’s beautiful and expensive knee long mink fur. The designer purse now hanged over the boy’s right shoulder which he held securely with his right hand, whereas the wife was scruffily dressed in the boy’s jeans, sneakers and his dull blue jacket. The wife and boy were totally oblivious to what happened, and the saleswoman who had still chatted on the stores intercom didn’t take any notice or thought anything strange happened. The CEO husband had now a wife that was everything else than a trophy wife and he complained about her buying so expensive things that did not go well with her style.

“Need to hurry now” Frank hurriedly said as he pressed the remotes bodyswap, Woooof .. and flash. The wife now had the boy’s taller skinny body with her head resting on top of it and the voluptuous and slightly shorter body of the wife now belonged to the boy which was crowned with his head. Now, John thought looked more pleased when the clothes again had resized and went better with the new bodies.

The remote suddenly blinked the “Press Life Swap (LS)” option again, and John took quickly took the remote from Frank and pressed the button. After the sudden flash, the boy looked confused and they heard the boy say in a soprano voice “My good, what am I doing here”, and he squeezed his way in between his husband and a boy who had the nerve to take her place. “Excuse me” he said in his now soft female voice, the wife now with the life of the boy moved back and said in deeper male voice “Oops, sorry mam, how the hell did I get in front of you”. They must have got each other’s voices too when they swapped lives, Frank said and looked surprised at his brother. The boy now took the pen that the saleswoman handed over and he gracefully signed the credit card receipt with his name “Elisabeth Nielsen”.

“Let me help you”, the boy’s new husband said as he took the shopping bags with his wife's new sexy lingerie and the new couple headed out small talking about the too slow saleswoman. “Let’s follow them” said Frank, and they left the former wife with her new life as nerdy boy with gift for her girlfriend.

The brothers kept a short distance to the elegantly dressed boy in his mink fur and designer purse whereas his CEO husband hold his arm around him, both of them smiling but oblivious of the big changes in their lives. The followed the new trophy wife and his husband out from the store into the chilly autumn and stooped just beside them. The boy started to rummage through his brown LV handbag.” Look now” said Frank, he really takes his new role seriously as Frank chuckled. John and Frank stood agape when the boy fished up a brown leather designer cigarette etui, and expertly opened it and took out a long cigarette and elegantly held it between his, well the former wife’s, fingers.

“Hahaha” this is to funny the brothers laughed. “He has probably never smoked in his whole life and now he seem to want smoking those long cigarettes as it is the most natural thing in the world to him” Frank smiled as he said that.

The nerdy boy had now placed the cigarette between his red painted lips and let it dangle for quite some time as he searched through his purse he moved a strand of blond hair falling in his face. He soon found what he was looking for, took out, lit the slim golden lighter and then the tip of his long cigarette. The cheeks billowed inwards as he took a deep drag. The boy listened to his husband who looked at him while saying “honey, wait here and I get the BMW so you don’t need to walk the long distance in your heels”. The boy in his mink fur nodded silently sucking in the smoke and then elegantly moved his hand with the cigarette to the side of his shoulder and tilted his head back as he blew out a long billow of the smoke slowly and softly said “I’ll wait here dear. Don't be long”.

Frank and John watched the boy continue smoking as he waited for his husband. Suddenly they also saw the former wife now in the boy’s body, clothes, and hair coming out from the store and waving away the foul cigarette smoke while grimacing a bit as he passed by his former body and life. The new boy headed off in the direction to the store across selling the latest computer games. The new trophy wife walked slowly to neighboring shop, a fur coat shop incidentally, and looked dreamily at the latest coats that had come in.

John and Frank looked pleased at each other and John then said, “Let’s try something else, let’s go to the…”
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