Here is what happened at another concert: It was at a amusement park, that was to have a concert on this hot summers night. There were far to many people (over 35,000 i found out later) for the concert area to hold and, still allow people to see the bands, To make seeing the bands worse the paved ground of the concert area was higher at the stage and lower as you got farther from the stage. There was a cement wall that bordered part of the concert area. This wall was bought about 2' wide and 4' high relative to the ground of the concert area. Behind the wall were grass and low shrubs that were the same height as the wall. The only easy way to get to the wall and grass/shrubs was from the concert area, as behind this, was a building. The wall, grass and shrubs were full of standing girls trying to get a better view of the bands. It was a hot summers night and the girls were sexily dressed to match the summers heat. As i looked up two girls, particularly annoyed by the shrubs, were holding hands, jumping on them together, crushing them further and breaking their branches, i could her the cracking as they yielded under their weight. This was going to be what i call a "multilevel" concert YES !! I left the concert area to get some beer, thinking i had plenty of time. The band started. This was not good, as once the crowd locked in i could not get to the girls standing the wall. I ran back it was too late. I could not even get close to the girls on the wall try as I might it was just two crowded. I missed the first band and now this. The band finely took a break and i made my move. I found a spot on the wall between two standing girls squeezed in and sat down. When the music started again i was ready. People from the grass/shrub area began pushing from behind The girl on my left side jumped off. I tried to take up as much space as possible so know one would move in. There was a guy on my left now. This really sucked as the girl on my right was turned almost facing me looking towards the band. I tried to get a girl on the shrubs to step on my fingers, but her weight was on the tangled mess of branches. I just sat there, finally the band quit and the crowd was starting to loosen up. The crowd and I started to scream "one more", till finally the band came back. A girl was now standing down in front of me, she glanced at the wall and me, I had been trying all night to hold some space and now there was not much left. I knew what she wanted i moved over as fast as i could in that moment of time i tipped to the side and looked at her. It I was like she flew on the wall, she moved so fast. As she bent to try to talk to some one down in the crowd her butt and bare leg hit the side of my face, her foot stepped then slid off my leg. She turned and looked at me for a instant to say, what looked like the word "sorry". I smiled the music was so loud that it did not matter. i looked up at her awesome body we were now concert "neighbors". She stood at a angle to me her heels against my leg, She had blonde shoulder length hair with short white pants. She had on blue short sleeved top, that almost touched her pants. Her sexy bare legs and backside curves were inches from my face. I had to tip away some times so she would not hit me as she moved. She wore some kind of low heeled wood sandals with hard wood heels, her bare foot held in by straps. She started to jump up and down i moved back a little and moved a broken branch from a smashed shrub closer to her foot so she would step on it. She briefly turned and looked down at me, i had my hands so she could see them, so she would know she did not step on me. I pretended not to see her. Now she would think it was the branch and not me. I did not really have do this as branches of flattened shrubs were already on parts of the wall. I started to put move a finger under her shoe when she started jumping up and down again I felt a waves of pain as she jumped up and down on my fingers. I yelled out but the music was so loud she could not hear. This was even more fun not only was she oblivious to the pain she was giving me but she was oblivious to the sounds i was making. i WAS a insect to her. I pulled my finger away as so as not to over do it and alert her, later i would find out that this was not nessary. The song changed Now she was dancing in place lifting her heel enough to easily put the tip of my finger under her beautiful body. I looked at her backside curves, her legs, her long blond hair, her whole being was crushing down on my little puny finger. The pain went up my hand and into my wrist but i kept on. I would "talk" to her but she did not hear my pleas, as i put my finger tip more under her sexy crushing heel. My finger tip was literally getting flatter under her heel which, made it even lees noticeable. [[The more flatter your finger becomes under a girls weight the easier it is to become flatter as she notices it less, and puts more weight on it]] The pain was getting too intense i moved my finger tip out from under her heel to take a break. Once again I put my finger went under her heel. only this time this time i felt something slide and pull, a very strange new feeling, in addition to the pain. I moved my finger out. then under again only this time the sliding was greater. She put all her weight on the heel that my finger was under. I felt her heel and the skin on my finger move TOGETHER. The skin of my finger was moving with HER not me. If she would have twisted her heel even just a tiny bit she would have ripped the skin and top flesh of my finger off. This was even more exciting the pain, the pulling, the sliding, her body moving to the music. Would she rip my finger ? I worried a bought a infection if she tore the skin though so i moved my index finger out. I moved the tip of my next finger under her heel a very little, so as not to "burn out" this finger too soon . The pain was "new " again. Soon after a short time i felt the "sliding" . I moved my finger out. I looked at my fingers my index finger had a large water blister that was not broken. The next finger a small blood blister at the tip. I was bummed that my skin would not let me enjoy the weight of this beautiful girl with out ripping. I put my little finger under her this was last finger i had "left". This finger did not last long either. Finally in time with the music I moved my index finger with the big water blister under her heel, her heel came down. She crushed the water blister on my finger. In addition to the pain i could feel the skin separating as the water blister expanded and blew out., my whole finger tip "slid". I took a "break" and the band finally stooped. I got off the wall before her and looked at her to see if she needed help to get off the wall. A jerk rushing to leave from the "shrub" zone hit into her from behind at the same time she was trying to get off the wall she started to fall. I caught her under her arm with one hand and she grabbed my other arm as she was falling. I pulled up hard so her knee would not crash into the asphalt, it was inches. Once again i felt her beautiful weight but this time i could not enjoy it, She said: "wow that was close" "thanks". I said: "anytime", "no problem" . I hurried off not wanting to let her to see my fingers, She had no idea of the pain, damage, and pleasure she gave me. I felt really happy, that i could give something back to her, and that i would have something to remember her and that night by. (at least for awhile). A new concert summer is coming YES!!!  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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