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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #167855

Raven meets a stranger who says she can become a knight but will she?

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Chapter #5

Seeing Raven

    by: The Nameless Hermit Author IconMail Icon
You continue to ride toward the castle. You look back once more to see the boy that is winning. He has long jet black hair that ends at his waist. Funny, you think, I've never seen a boy with hair that long before. You look back at the road.
"Oh yeah! I'm am the only one standing, ten fights in a row. I believe that would be ten coins each." Apperently they have a champion.
"Come on Raven. What are you goona buy with that? A dress?" There is a laugh shared. You stop your horse. You ears must not be working. Raven? Dress?
"Right, and what would I do with a dress. Cut it up and make bandages for you guys?" This Raven sounds like a girl. You look back at the boys. They are standing around the champion, Raven. Finally Raven turns so you can see her. Raven is a girl! Her eyes are about as black as her hair. She has golden brown skin, as a result of being in the sun for a long time. You still have time before you need to be at the castle. You could stay and watch this Raven. She and her friends are having a laugh guessing what she could buy with all the money, which apperently she has a lot of, she has.
"Yeah or maybe buy your father back his pride." A boy says harshly. Everyone stops laughing and grinning instantly, the boy seems to have gone to far.
"What did you say?" Raven's tone is very grim.
"You heard me. Or maybe another daughter so that your father wouldn't be afraid to show his face in public." Raven tackles the boy. She eaisly overpowers him and is siting on his chest beating...well beating the boy to a pulp. When the other boys try to drag her off she gets out of their grip and continues to attack the boy.
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