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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fanfiction · #1730276

Fantastic Mr Fox characters transform in fantastic ways! Pick one or create your own!

This choice: Enough with the charade. Kristofferson wants Ash BADLY.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #8

Right Thing To Do

    by: citywalker Author IconMail Icon
"Set me down on your stomach," Kristofferson said, hoping that his lust wasn't causing an error in judgment.

"Why?" Ash asked. "What are you..." his voice trailed off, unsure of what Kristofferson was trying to do.

"I don't know," Kristofferson said. "I just..." he stopped talking as the sight of Ash's pulsing cock caught his attention. He had never seen anything like it before; somewhere inside, he felt that he just had to touch it. "I just want to..." he continued, unsure of what he could say that would express what he was feeling.

As if he was picking up Kristofferson's thoughts telepathically, Ash slowly nodded, and lowered his paw down to stomach level, where Kristofferson jumped off. The white fur on Ash's stomach was very soft and smooth, and as Kristofferson walked on it, Ash began to chuckle slightly, Kristofferson's footsteps tickling him. The laughter caused his stomach to move slightly, and Kristofferson lost his balance, lurching forward, falling straight into Ash's foxhood.

"Whoa," Kristofferson said, his muzzle now inches from Ash's shaft. He looked up at the towering presence above him, stretching at least twice as tall as Kristofferson was. Whistling in wonder, he took in the amazing view. It just felt right. He had never thought of himself as one to be attracted to another guy, least of all his cousin, who had seemed to be antagonistic towards him since he first arrived, but this was different. Ash was now a whole different fox, confident and powerful, and there was a certain sense of power, an aura around him, that was certainly sexy and irresistible to Kristofferson.

The smaller fox wrapped his arms around Ash's shaft, not even reaching halfway around it. Ash leaned his head back and began to moan. He had pleasured himself before many times, and sometimes he had pictured in his head the lean, muscled figure of his athletic cousin while he did it, not really sure what that meant. But this was different; this was real, and the way Kristofferson had been acting, so respectful and admiring, it felt all the more special. Looking at his little cousin riding his cock, pressing his body into it, he could even feel Kristofferson's own tiny foxhood through his shorts. The thought drove Ash wild; he just had to see it.

He reached out his paw and tugged on the back of Kristofferson's collar, trying to pull his shirt off. Kristofferson quickly understood and offered no resistance, sticking his arms off and allowing the shirt to slide off easily. He then unfastened his shorts and Ash's immense fingers lightly grasped them, pulling them off completely, setting the clothes down on the ground some yards away. Both foxes were completely naked now, both sporting hard-as-rock erections that desperately needed to be attended to.

"Kristofferson?" Ash said, his voice heavy and panting.

"Yeah, Ash?" Kristofferson said back, no less excited.

"I-I just wanted to say something." Ash searched for how to put his thoughts into words. "I know I haven't always been the easiest fox in the world to get along with. I gave you a hard time when you first got here; I was a jerk. But in these past few weeks, since the adventure at Bean's house... Well, I've started to feel really close to you."

"We're cousins," Kristofferson said, smiling, "we're supposed to be close."

"It's more than that," Ash said. "You're like this perfect fox, smart, and strong, and kind and patient. You put up with me and defended me when I didn't deserve it. I- I love you, Kristofferson."

Kristofferson was speechless; his mouth was left open, stunned. Ash had never been so eloquent before, but what he said hit home; Kristofferson felt the same way. Finally, he looked up at Ash, tears of joy beginning to form in his eyes. "I love you too, Ash."

The two cousins looked at each other, both smiling and feeling inside a new sense of closeness. Taking his finger, Ash gently stroked Kristofferson's head, running down his back to his tail. Kristofferson, unable to contain himself any longer, started stroking his own hardness, the sensation of Ash's finger and the sensual aroma surrounding him driving him to the next level. Ash began to rub his own cock as well, but within a few seconds, Kristofferson was back working on it too, moving his body up and down, licking it and grasping it tightly, stimulating the giant fox as best he could.

Ash began to moan, and he could feel his heart pumping faster. The feeling of Kristofferson's silky chest and stomach fur against his sensitive shaft was unlike any other, and he knew that he wasn't going to last much longer. Within a minute, he began to tense up, his cock ready to explode. Kristofferson felt it too, and worked even harder. Finally, Ash began to erupt, sending strings of hot cum flying into the air. Some of it shot far, disappearing into the trees. Some fell straight down, landing on Ash's stomach and coating Kristofferson. Ash shot several large spurts; he had much angst pent-up inside, ready to get out, and the whole idea of being so big and with his cousin just made it even better.

As he finished, Kristofferson slid down, landing on Ash's sticky groin. He still had his own business to attend to so he began stroking hard, trying to get off while in this amazing situation. Ash noticed his cousin's attempts, and reached out a finger, gently rubbing Kristofferson's chest, sending shivers down his spine and causing the little fox to come within seconds, adding onto the mess already in Ash's fur.

Now finished, both foxes were breathing heavily. Ash stretched out, knocking down some more trees in the process. Kristofferson sat back against Ash's drooping cock, reveling in what had just happened. They were both content, not needing anyone or anything else in the world right now. It was a perfect moment.
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