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Jay is walking home when he discovers a ring, which allows him to take control of people.

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Chapter #8

Obedient Sister

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You feign comfort as she looks around the den in a panic. "It's alright, you blacked out suddenly. You feel alright?"
"I feel fine...I think...", she stumbles a little bit. "Can you get mom? She might be able to help"
You smile slyly as you lift the ring. "Don't worry, I have all the help you need." The beam shoots out and engulfs her. In moments, you sister Samantha is rendered your obedient slave.
"You listen closely Sam, when you awaken from this trance, you will be my slave. You will no longer be your own person, and will be owned by me. You will obey my every command, and I will have absolute control over your life. Do you understand?"
"I understand."
"When I say the words "Mind Sorbet" you will return to this trance. When I snap my fingers, you will leave this trance, and have no memory of being in it. You will have no comprehension of being programmed, and will believe you have always been my slave. Understand?"
"I understand."
You snap you fingers and she looks around, startled. "What's going on, Bro? Did I black out again?"
"None of that matters. I want you to come over here and give me a hug."
She walks over and throws herself into your arms. "Whatever you say, Jay."
"Now kiss me." She hesitates, but finally plants her lips onto yours, with a satisfying, "Your the boss, Jay."
You smile. "Don't call me Jay anymore when we're in private. Call me master."
Sam stares at you. "Why?"
"Well, I am your owner, aren't I? It stands to reason that you should treat me as such."
Sam stares at you uncomfortably for a moment, but finally shakes her head and gets on her knees before you. "How may your slave serve you master?"
Perfect...she's all yours.
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