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by RatDog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #186373

...The last thing you remember was buying a pack of Mentos your way to work.

This choice: You are crushed to death under the rubble.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

No Surprises Here

    by: RatDog Author IconMail Icon
I guess you just had to click on this link to see if I really meant it, didn't you? Well I did,
so here's how it goes:

You try your best to escape but there is nowhere safe to run. You are buried under tons of
concrete and brick rubble as the subway tunnel collapses on top of you. The last thing you
are thinking before your life essence dissipates is "Did I remember to feed the dog?" Funny
the mundane things people think of in their last moments on earth...

In this thread there is no afterlife, no "Stairway to Heaven" (or Hell) waiting for you.
You're just dead, that's it. If this ending is too dark for you, you can always go back to the
previous chapter and try your luck with the other link... If only it were that easy in real
life.

THE END.

You've come to the end of the story. You can:

  1. Step back to the previous chapter.
  2. Start reading the story from the beginning.

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