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One day, a teenage boy becomes God, with all the omnipotence that goes with the job!

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Chapter #9

Contemplations and changes

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Jack walked back into his bedroom and closed the door behind him mentally. Waving his hand, he created a large mirror on one wall.

"Okay," he said to himself, "now it's time to improve this body."

"Not without me, you're not," said a female voice behind him.

Jack whirled and found himself face-to-face with Jill. Suddenly he felt dizzy and staggered a bit. Jill did the same.

"Whoa. What was that?" said Jack once he'd recovered.

Jill had recovered at the same instant Jack had. "Probably has to do with the fact that my mind is still human. I'm omnipotent and omniscient and all that, but no human is used to being in two places at once, especially not seeing himself seeing herself, and especially not in different bodies."

"But aren't I also omnipresent?" asked Jack.

"Sure, I'm omnipresent," replied Jill, "but that's in a metaphysical sense. No human's used to having multiple physical forms in different places."

"Okay, I guess that makes sense," said Jack. "But then why am I here?"

"I'm here because I thought I needed a woman's eye when it comes to improving my male body. And I could also use some male eyes for improving my female body."

"I didn't think I needed a woman's eyes!" retorted Jack.

"But I did, so I'm here," said Jill.

Jill fell silent, and Jack took a moment to give Jill's body a once-over. Just like his current body was his natural one, Jill's was the body that would have developed had nothing changed about Jack save only for swapping his Y chromosome with his dad's X chromosome.

The result wasn't particularly impressive. At 15, Jill had clearly entered puberty, but had a plain face, no breasts to speak of, a pudgy waist, and a flat ass.

"Yeah, I'm definitely going to have to do some work on me," said Jill.

"Me first, though," said Jack.

"Oh, of course I can go first," replied Jill. "I've got all the time in the world."

Jack was about to start when he heard another female voice, this one lower. He turned both his bodies around to see Jackie standing there. She had a body mostly like Jill's, except for an exact replica of Jack's cock sticking out from her crotch.

"What, I'm contemplating the nature of my existence and I didn't invite me? How rude am I?" Jackie complained.

"I didn't invite you!" said Jack and Jill simultaneously.

"I know I didn't, which is why I invited myself."

"I don't know how I feel about shemales right now. I kinda screwed things up last time around," admitted Jack.

"Yeah, I did, but there's nothing outright wrong about giving a chick a dick. It was giving them gigantic dicks and making them miniature giantesses and such that I really screwed up."

"Anyway, why else am I here?" asked Jill.

"I'm here because my body is pretty much necessarily a fusion of mine and mine," explained Jackie. "I'm not about to let myself change my body when it affects mine too without being here to make sure I don't do anything that would make me look too crazy."

Jack nodded, and again turned back to the mirror.

"Okay, how long do I think my cock should be?" he asked.

Jill reached down and hefted it, using a bit of power to make it instantly erect. Jack moaned just a bit as his female alter-ego's soft hands rubbed along the underside of his shaft, even though Jill wasn't doing it at all sexually.

"I think I should be, what, eighteen inches hard? That sound good, Jackie?"

"I think that sounds good," said Jackie, pleased that she'd also be getting a dick that size. "What do I think?"

"Yeah, eighteen should be fine," said Jack, "and twelve soft."

"If I ever let it get soft," laughed Jill.

Jack glared, but used his power to alter his physical form. His cock quivered as it jutted further outward, thickening and lengthening until it stood at a proud foot and a half. Jackie was very pleased with her matching appendage.

"I think I need to be taller, as well," said the shemale. "Six feet even ought to do it."

Jack and Jill had both been thinking the same thing, of course, and Jack grew until he reached his desired height. Jackie grew a little, too, keeping her halfway between the heights of her male and female alter-egos.

"And I definitely need some muscle, and a more handsome face," said Jill, and Jack grew his muscles a little and rearranged his face into one that was still recognizably his, but worthy of any movie star.

"Now that," said Jackie, "is a body I'd let fuck me in the ass any day. Or that I'd fuck in the ass," she said, slapping Jack's.

"I'm up next," said Jill.

"Well," said Jack, "I definitely need some curves."

"Yeah, definitely," said Jackie, who could feel the muscle underneath the pudginess and wanted to bring it out.

"Okay," said Jill, "how about this?" She snapped her fingers and her body instantly became a highly voluptuous 36P-20-52, with ass-length hair and a supermodel-calibre face.

"Oh, yes, I like that," said Jackie, who had gained an equally curvy body, a face that was an incredible fusion of Jack's and Jill's, and showed the muscles she'd gotten from Jack to full effect.

"Okay," said Jack, "if I'm happy with my bodies, which one do I go out as? I'm still new enough to this omnipotence thing that being in multiple places at once for prolonged periods of time is probably going to confuse me and I don't want to lose control again."

"I think I should go out as me," said Jill, indicating Jack. "Whether I like it or not, I'm most comfortable being fully male."

"I agree," said Jackie. "And it's not like I can't become me or me any time I want."

Jill and Jackie enveloped Jack in a hug, their four huge tits squashing against his chest and back, Jack's cock rubbing against Jill's pussy and Jackie's cock twitching against Jack's asshole. Then they vanished, and Jack was left in his bedroom, feeling more at peace with himself and ready to face the possibilities his powers offered.

He could still hear prayers, of course, but since answering prayers was what had gotten him into so much trouble last time, he largely ignored them, except for removing the mental block that had kept Lauren from having orgasms. As long as he was God, nobody who wanted orgasms was going to go without, he decided.

He walked out of his room, stepping through the door, and went downstairs to find Sally just having recovered from her five massive orgasms.

"Jack!" she shrieked. "Why are you still naked?"

"This again?" sighed the teenage God. "Clearly your last five orgasms weren't enough, so now you're going to go up to your room and orgasm your brains out for a week straight. Nobody will miss you and you won't die from dehydration or starvation or anything like that."

Sally felt her pussy tingling and found herself compelled to run up to her room, close the door and lie down on her bed. Jack had soundproofed the room, but he knew she was screaming at the top of her lungs as pleasure flooded her brain.

Jack smiled, snapped his fingers, and vanished from his house.

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