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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1904620

You are a sorcerer experimenting with Tickle Magic, emphasis on the word "experimenting"

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Chapter #5

It's water, but it's also torture!

    by: The Kev Author IconMail Icon
You can't take anymore of this heat and you decide to try the "water". Wanting only to test what kind of illusion this is, you plunge both of your bare feet into the pool.

You've been walking barefoot through the desert and the sand has been burning your feet, but when you put the into the magical pool, you instantly feel relief! the water is the perfect temperature, not overly cold, but perfect for cooling you off. It feels so good that you lower your self in a little bit more, savoring the feeling as the cool water rises up your ankles, past your thighs and up to your waist. You groan a little sigh of relief and then giggle....

Wait, giggle? Why are you giggling?

"keehehehehehehe"...

You instinctively wrap your arms around your stomach realizing that the water its self is making you feel as though little hands are tickling you there!

"AAH! KHEEEHEHEHEHEHEHE!"

You feel embarrassed giggling like a little girl when suddenly the water adds your bare feet to the tickling treatment! You now feel thousands of tiny little hands skittering across your stomach and up and down your arches!

"AAH! NOOO! AAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!"

You cry out, as though there were anyone around to hear you. Just about the time it goes for the back of your knees you desperately grab onto the dry sand and struggle to pull your self out. this causes you to sink a little deeper into the watter as you try to find a foothold and you feel as though little hands are getting your ribs and nipples just as you power out of the water and onto dry land.

You lay there exhausted and still giggling while the remaining water continues to tickle your bare skin as it dries. After a few minutes you've fried off sufficiently but to your dismay, you now have to deal with the scorching heat all over again.

"No!" you think "I'm not gonna let this dimension beat me!" realizing that this is probably one of the end game scenarios, that you have to LET your self be tickle tortured (probably for hours, if not days!) and then is ends.

The heat starts to overpower you, you feel hot, miserable and sleepy.


You've been perspiring the whole long walk to this "water" and whatever it is, it has to be better than the scorching heat
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1. You have to jump into the pool

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