the heat is so unbearable that all you can think is how good the water felt, minus the tickle torture of course. you gaze up at the hot sun as it beats down on your hot, bare skin.
You're nearly in tears, both from the heat and from accepting the fact that you'll take the endless torture of all your tickle spots in order to end this misery. You groan and jump into the pool!
*SPLASH*
Your whole body is instantly and soothingly cooled off to just the right temperature, you've never felt so revealed! You seem to float as you sink farther and farther down until you realize that you've been holding your breath this whole time, it never occurred to you that you may drown, although you've never heard of these dimensions being lethal to anyone.
Just about this time you feel the little hands again, they skitter all over your bare feet, over and across your toes and up your legs to the back of your knees, You prepare to laugh your head off but stop your self, you 're still afraid of drowning.
You feel hands working your stomach up to your ribs, and you feel humiliated as a burst of bubbles comes out of your mouth as you've let our a burst of laughter.
You know that the'yre going for your armpits, which are wide open as you have your arms raised over your head, but you don't lower them, the water feels too good!
The hands work their way over your pits and play with your ribs and nipples and all of a sudden you've got your whole body being tickled at once!
"MMMMMMHMHMHHMHMHMHMHMHMHMHHM!"
You try to keep your laughter silent, but you know you can't hold your breath forever, and as the hands start to expertly draw little circles on your armpits and the ones below start vigorously scribbling up and down your feet you know it's hopeless, needing so badly to laugh your head off, you take a deep breath!
Amazingly you can breath! the water feels just like air, and as the hands work your feet and pits like a pro they start to explore your belly and belly button and you go nuts! You realize to your horror that, although you can breath the water it makes you ten times more ticklish!!!!!
"BWAHAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA NOPLEZ! NOAAAAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA!"
You try to curl into a fetal position but the water still feels too good! your whole upper body is wide open and your legs and feet struggle but cant escape as your surrounded by the water! You have no choice but to float there with your arms up and take all the tickling that the water is dishing our on your bare feet, knees, ribs, stomach, nipples and armpits. It even goes for your neck which makes you giggle like a child despite your self.
There's nothing you can do to stop the torture, you can only hope that it was designed to last for minutes, not hours, and certainly not days!
You Lose! Have fun having all your worst spots tortured! =)
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