by Mr. Icarus
In this fun tale you're a student at Hogwarts, but due to a spell gone wrong you shrink!
|Your name is Malcolm Taylor. You're not a very well known student at Hogwarts, and the main reason you're so behind-the-scenes is because you're just not the greatest at making friends. You're in Ravenclaw and you love magic. You're trying to invent your own spell, because you noticed that the shrinking charm Reducio can only be used to return an enlarged object (from Engorgio) back to its original size and Diminuendo cannot be used on living things, so you wanted to bridge that gap with a spell of your own, that could shrink anything. But you run into a bit of Neville-style bad luck and all this tempering with untamed magic causes your wand to explode, and it shrinks you and all the objects around you. |
Please, make an honest-to-God attempt at typing correctly. Typos happen, I know that, but some people type like they've never been to Elementary school. If I see typos I can try to fix it for you, but if you type so horribly that I can't comprehend what it is you were trying to say then I will either revise the chapter myself or, if I'm particularly lazy, delete it.
Don't be offensive. It's not hard to be not offensive. Malcolm isn't racist, sexist, etc. So don't try to make him that way.
Type in Second Person. (You do this, you do that. You're Malcolm Taylor, you suck at making spells. Etc)
Try to always give choices. I hate chapters where at the end it just says "Continue" as the only option. That takes the fun out of an interactive.
Okay, now, feet is preferred, but you don't HAVE to write feet chapters. Butt, breasts, armpits, I don't care. I'm just telling you I personally like feet and would love to see some feet chapters in here.
That should be about it. Have fun writing and reading!
Sam Gamgee (hatband)