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Rated: E · Interactive · Thriller/Suspense · #1931493

[original] Brandon tests his shrinking device while taking care of his little brother.

This choice: Maybe this whole situation isn't so bad...[willing]  •  Go Back...
Chapter #7

Maybe this whole situation isn't so bad...

    by: NEDM (TwoTailedMoon) Author IconMail Icon
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You tensed yourself in fear as the giant hand descended onto you. Kyle's door sized fingers enclosed around you with their warmth as your whole body was pressed into the boy's fleshy palm.

The G-force of being pulled upwards made you slightly dizzy for a moment, though it only lasted for a second.

Light quickly broke through the spaces between Kyle's fingers as he spread open his palm nearly two inches away from his face.

You tumbled over onto warm bumpy surface; The smell of Kyle's sweet syrupy breath now completely enveloping you.

Nervously, you slowly began to look up at his enormously innocent smiling face; totally brimming with awe from ear-to-ear.

There was something enrapturing about it to you. It's weird. Back when you were still normal sized, you never got this feeling when you looked at your little brother's face. Something about your new-found size and perspective must have really changed the way you looked at things. To you, Kyle literally looked like an all-powerful boy god.

"Woooow! you hardly even weigh anything!" Kyle playfully jolted his hand up and down, causing you to go air-born two or three times.

"Alight! alright!...." you groan as you attempted to stand yourself up again.

Kyle giggled at this "Heh, sorry!" The boy squinted his face, sticking his tongue out as he rubbed the side of his head apologetically.

You couldn't help but watch as Kyle's enormous wet tongue obtruded from his adorably moist lips. Words couldn't describe how fascinating it was to simply just watch. It felt so odd to see something so big move so fast and vividly. You almost felt a pinch of disappointment when he pulled it back through his lips.

Little did you realize that Kyle must have picked up on how you were staring at his mouth. Finding your reaction to be interesting, Kyle slowly stuck his tongue back out and began to dart it back and forth across his lips; all the while watching you closely.

Thinking that Kyle was just being goofy, you took the opportunity to watch the entrancing display; your own mouth slightly ajar with intrigue.

Being only an 10 year old, Kyle was immediately amused by your apparent fascination with what he was doing. He then started to imagine how he himself must have looked from your perspective.

....

"Wow... I must look like a GIANT to you.." Kyle whispered out loud.

You immediately snapped out of the spellbind, slightly blushing in embarrassment.

"W-what's that supposed to mean?" you asked, clearly flustered.

"You wanna see my tongue? UHHHH?" Kyle pointed to his mouth as he stuck the massive saliva-coated tasting muscle past his lips once more.

"W...Why would I want to do that?" your face burned with further embarrassment now that you knew your brother was aware of your fascination with his tongue.

"I've seen your tongue a bunch of times before..." You were telling the truth, but deep down you really did want to get a closer look.

"Yeah, but now you're tiny" Kyle spoke down to you with a slight giggle.

Without saying another word, Kyle brought his hand up to his drooping tongue which was now hanging from his moist pink lips

You heart started to race. There it was, an arms length away from you. Your eyes widened as you watched it wriggle eagerly; small droplets of saliva slowly dripping down the front of it. You could actually feel the heat coming off of it by just standing there. Gulping with nervousness you started to give into the temptation of getting closer.

You took two steps forward. The massive red surface was like a bumpy wet wall to you. You subconsciously began to reach for it, but quickly pulled your hand back the instant you realized what you were doing.

("...Should I really touch it?...What would Kyle think? Would he even notice?") You thought to yourself.

The enticement was becoming too much. You couldn't just stare at it. Slowly, you began to raise your hand towards the warm wet mass. You took a deep breath and pressed your palm into it.

It was warmer than you had anticipated. The saliva that was slowly flowing down the pink surface now completely covered your hand. For some reason an odd jolt of pleasure quickly traveled through your body for a moment.

Without warning, the wall started to quiver slightly as Kyle began to giggle at the feeling of your tiny hand's contact against his tongue.

Pulling your hand back, you simply stared at the gooey substance now coating it.

The massive tongue slurped back into boy's impossibly wide lips as he smiled; a small flow of saliva had dripped down the right side of his mouth.

"Hah! I didn't think you were going to touch it!" Kyle chirped gleefully.

The blush returned to your face.

You watched as Kyle rolled his eyes as he hummed to himself, likely trying to pick up any taste from where you had touched his tongue.

"Aw, I don't think I got a good taste" The boy sighed jokingly with a hint of actual disappointment. He stared down at you as if he was formulating something.

'Um...Hey.. Close your eyes for a second" The boy whispered as he brought his lips closer to you.

You could already tell what he was planning. You didn't mind though. Deep down you wanted to continue experimenting with tongue. There was no denying it anymore. Something about this whole situation aroused you somehow. Ever since you touched his tongue, a tightness had been growing in your loins. A part of you felt a little ashamed of having these feelings, but at the same time your desires were pushing you to keep going.

Kyle also seemed to be enjoying this, but you assumed it wasn't for the same reason. More likely because he was just enjoying the control and influence he physically had over you.

Without even waiting for you to close your eyes, Kyle's enormous tongue drooped out and began to sweep forward across his palm.

You could only watch with nervous excitement as it came closer and closer.

Before you had time to brace yourself it had already made impact with your body. Your face had now directly pressed into the warm wet wall. Pulling your head back slightly, strands of gooey saliva had formed between you and it's surface, creating a sort of binding tension. The cohesion made it nearly impossible for you to distance yourself from the wriggling surface. The tongue slurped up, causing your body follow it momentarily due to the stickiness. You opened your eyes slightly to see something incredible not far in front of you.

Kyle had pulled his tongue back just enough for you to see see past his lips. The Inside of Kyle's mouth looked like a dark, gooey, wriggling cave. It was at that instant that you felt pure arousal. The feeling of Kyle's thick, warm, wet, gooey tongue against your entire body and the view of the inside of his massive mouth was too much. Your semi-erect cock bobbed against the inside of your soaked shorts. Just as you were secretly hoping he'd pull you inside, gravity began to peel your body off of the tongue.

You experienced a short free-fall as you landed back onto the pink plump platform below.

There you laid, sprawled out on your little brother's palm, utterly soaked with the boy's saliva. You had begun panting rapidly due to all the sexual stimulation.

Up above you could hear Kyle humming again, but this time it sounded much more pleased.

"Mmmmmm, for a little person you actually taste kinda good" Kyle giggled. He was only joking, but his words had a great impact your growing titillation.

Kyle was having so much fun that he brought his head down to begin licking you some more. You didn't even have time to react as it pinned you down onto your back. You made no effort to resist. Wave after wave of Kyle's licking sent your body into a cyclone of pleasure. You let out a soft whimper as your now fully erect cock was begging to be released from it's confinement.

Kyle pulled his face back up and stared at your puny drenched form. All around you Kyle's palm glistened with saliva. The boy was starting to feel a sensation he's never experienced before. It was hard to describe, but it made his body all tingly and warm. The only thing he could safely determine was that it felt good. In his mind, if it felt good, it was good. The sensation caused him to blush a bit.

After taking a deep breath and trying to compose yourself, you attempted steadily balance yourself up into a standing position on the slippery palm below. You still hadn't forgotten that view of inside Kyle's mouth.

Thinking of a way to take advantage of Kyle's naivety, you started to formulate a plan. You were in desperate need to get off, and getting inside that mouth was the best way.

"H-hey Kyle..."

"mm what?" The boy's eyes were slightly glazed from the new feeling he was experiencing.

"Why don't we play another game?"

"What kind of game?"

"...how about ..cave adventurer...?"

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