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Can a human prisoner survive in a jail built for giant monsters? Keep it a fantasy please

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Chapter #5

Tough Love

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Just then, you hear more thunderous footsteps that you realize aren't coming from Cree. When they stop, you hear a voice say, "What's up, lardball? Looking forward to this afternoon?" It was Clover, that grootslang guard that was also out to eat you. She and Cree had made a bet with each other on which of them will eat you first. Ignoring Clover's "lardball" comment, Cree replied "Not that it's any of your business, hose nose, but yes, I am looking forward to this afternoon. There are only two things I love more than the taste of humans, and that's beating the inmates to a pulp, and scaring the shit out of the little punks that come through here every month."

Like many prisons, Under Gloom has a program that exposes young monsters who are at risk of becoming criminals to the realites of life in prison. Every month a group of such monsters is given a tour of the facility, and shown where they'll end up if they don't change their ways.

This gives you an idea. Perhaps you can jump ship from Cree to one of the kids. It might be safer than your current situation, or it might not. But anything's got to be better than risking this sadistic hyena bitch finding you.

Later that day, Cree and Clover are both in the prison lobby, standing in front of a group of teenage monster girls of various species. You had been hiding in Cree's hair this whole time, waiting to get your chance. Just then, Destiny enters the room and stands before the group.

"Welcome to Under Gloom, or as it's known to our inmates, Hell. Each of you had better listen to what I'm about to say, because I'm only saying it once. You are here because you chose to make the wrong decisions in life, and so your parents have given us custody of you all for the day. So for the next six hours, I'm your new mommy. And guess what? I'm a mother who believes in the tough love policy. Ask any inmate here, and they'll tell you that you do not want to mess with this mama, or the punishment will be severe."

It was at this point that one of the girls, a weretiger, let out an unimpressed "Pfft". In an instant, Destiny stormed over toher and got right in her face. "What the hell was that? Do you think this is funny? That I'm joking when I say none of us will hesitate to put you in your place?" The tigress just rolled her eyes.

"Oh I see, you're not taking the situation seriously." Said Destiny with a sneer "Well, we''ll soon fix that. Clover, take this one to the Dark Side and put her in an empty cell. We'll see how serious she is then."

Clover grabs the tiger's wrist and takes her away. Meanwhile Destiny turns things over to Cree, who cackles evilly and she stares down at the group, slapping her nightstick against her palm.


"Well well well, fresh meat. You little pukes know what my job is? To tenderize new meat. My favorite sound in the world is the sound of bones shattering after I give them a good beating with this." She brandished her nightstick, pointing it in a dragon girl's face as she was shaking with fear.

Cree orders the group to follow her, where are they going?
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