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Tickle the girls/cards from yu-gi-oh

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Chapter #60

Carly's payback

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"You *pant* two are so gonna get it." Carly promised with a wide grin that was somehow both evil and playful at the same time. The kids in question couldn't deny their excitement, especially after they saw Akiza wiggle her fingers playfully.

"Payback time!" The teens shouted before pouncing on the twins, tickling them mercilessly. Carly pounced on Leo, scribbling her fingers on his sides while blowing raspberries on his stomach. Akiza got Luna who snaked one hand on her jacket to attack her bare armpit while using her other hand to get her ribs.

The kids were hysterical as the teens seemed to figure out just how ticklish they were. The kids couldn't keep themselves still for once, actually squirming and flailing under their grasps.

"We got you this time." Akiza teased, rubbing her nose on Luna's like a mom, making the girl shiver a bit

"Just remember, you asked for this." Carly said, tickling under Leo's chin, making him giggle hysterically

Minutes flew by and the kids were lying on the ground. Their arms were spread out to their sides and they were laughing too hard to move as the teens never let up. Just what they wanted. The kids were crying from laughing so hard as the older girls found some more spots on them.

Leo nearly curled into a ball as Carly got his bellybutton and in between his toes.

Akiza found a spot between Luna's ribs that was driving her mad and found out her pinkie toes was especially sensitive

The twins fell victim to silent laughter as the torture continued. They couldn't move. Every finger on them felt more ticklish the longer this went on. And yet, this is exactly what they wanted. And they were loving this. The teens could take it and enjoy it. Now they could dish it out just as good if not better then them and they were loving the torment.

After a few more minutes, the two finally stopped and let them breathe. The kids couldn't stop giggling for a few minutes as the lingering feels still remained for a while.

"That was awesome." Leo finally said as Carly handed him a glass of water and a napkin to wipe his tears away. " You two can really dish it out."

Akiza helped Luna sit up and helped tie her hair back up. "When did you two get so good?"

"Plenty of practice. Plus we learned for the best." Akiza said, nudging Luna while Carly playfully ruffled Leo's hair

The twins smirked at each other. "You know, you still never made us give up ." They said, giggling in anticipation.

"True, but maybe tomorrow ok. You two need some rest." Akiza said softly, picking Luna up. Carly did the same with Leo, the two kids were now suddenly asleep from exhaustion.

The two laid the kids on the couch and cooed at how they curled up next to each other.

"See ya later you two." Carly said softly as the two left the sleeping kids.
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