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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #2037796

The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

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Chapter #6

Vienna searches for Laura

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
Vienna left the stall and the ladiesroom to find you and beg you to turn her back. You had been waiting for her thinking about what do do. When she came out of the ladiesroom you decided it would be more fun if Vienna didn't think it was you who did this to her. So you removed all knowledge from her brain that you were the cause of her problem.

When she saw you she asked, "Do I look any different?"

"No Vienna, you look fine."

"I do? You don't see anything different at all?"

"Yes, what are you getting at? Are you sick?"

"No, you aren't going to believe this, but you are my best friend so believe me. I am really a man."

"Your a man," you said incredulously using your acting talents.

"Yes I am and I don't know how it happened but someone I have been put into this body.."

"You aren't making any sense. You have always been a female."

"No, when I woke up this morning I was a guy and now I'm not."

"You are putting me on," you said with a smirk on your face.

"No, I'm not. You have to believe me!" Vienna said exasperated.

"How can I? I know you've always been a girl."

"But, I'm not. I swear."

"Look there is Tracie, lets see if she knows you." Tracie was a friend of both you and Vienna.

"OK."

"But, don't tell her you're a guy. If everyone knows you as a girl and you tell everyone your a guy they'll think your crazy."

"You are right," Vienna said thoughtfully. You and Vienna go over to Tracie. If Tracie thought Vienna was a guy, she would say something. But when they greeted her, Tracie didn't say anything.

"See I told you, you said. "Everyone knows you are a woman."

"You are right," Vienna said dejected. "What do you think I should do?"


"I think you should just go about your normal day and we can talk after school."

"Do you think that is best?"

"Yes....Hey has anything else changed about you?"

"Anything else??? Isn't becoming a woman enough?"

"Well, yes, but if you are going to get through the day we should see if anything else has changed. Let's look at your ID."

"Vienna reaching into her purse and pulled out her school ID. It all looked right to her, exccept of course for the picture of her which was clearly female and the F under the line that said "Sex." "Looks right to me," Vienna proclaimed referring to her name and address and class at school.

"Looks right to me to."

"What's your next class?"

"History"

"That seems right too. Everything seems normal. Just go to your classes and don't tell anyone what you have told me and we'll try and figure this out after school."

"If you think that is best."

"I do. Oh and you should fix your makeup." Her mascara and eye liner was a bit blurred due to her crying before. Without thinking, Vienna reached into her purse as she had done thousands of times before and got her compact and fixed the damage to her makeup. She did this naturally. Despite this and all evidence the the contrary Vienna never thought for one second that she had always been a female. Not even that her name was and in her opinion always been Vienna lessened her belief that she was really a man up until a few minutes ago. After fixing her makeup, you and Vienna went your separate ways to your next class.
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