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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #2037796

The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

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Chapter #5

You fetch Vienna

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
Vienna didn't know she was going spend the night at your house. In fact, she has a date with her boyfriend Gary. When you arrived at Vienna's house she was already dressed for her date, wearing a sexy dress and high heels. Her makeup had been done and she was waiting for Gary to arrive. He wouldn't be there for an hour and a half. But despite being long ready she would make him wait when he got here. Due to mental manipulation you convinced Vienna to come to your house and wait for Gary there. She phoned Gary up and told him where she would be. Then she returned with you back to your house.

When you got there, you and Vienna went to your room. Vienna didn't notice anything out of place even though you had manipulated the minds of your family. She would have noticed if she was paying attention though.

Once in your room you told Vienna, "Well are you going to apologize or what?"

"For what?" Vienna knew what you were talking about but she didn't think she did anything wrong.

"You know, now apologize."

"I will not!!!"

"You had better. If you know what's good for you."

"What is that suppose to mean?"

"You'll find out."

"Look, Gary will be here soon. I am not apologizing. Are we just going to stand here?"

"If you are not going to apologize. I guess so."

Time ticked by and eventually Gary was at the door. Vienna left to be with him. But a few minutes later Vienna returned to your room.

"I told him I had stuff to fix with you here and to go," Vienna said. She didn't know why she did that. It was a thought put into her head.

"It's for the best. You weren't ready to go out."

"For the best?"

"Yes, look in the mirror." Vienna did as she was asked and looked. What she saw in the mirror wasn't her body but Gary's body. You had swapped minds between Gary and Vienna. It was Vienna's body with Gary's mind in it that had just drove off.

"OH MY GOD, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?"

"I think it's quite obvious, now are you going to apologize?"

Without any choice and without any feeling in it Vienna said, "I'm sorry."

"I don't believe you mean it." you said.

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