This choice: You comfort Rey, and explain everything. • Go Back... Rey. Rey! Look at me. I want to explain myself. It’s not what you think. You said. When Rey holds her head up, you can see her eyes are red from crying hard. Rey. Listen I never-ack!!! You said as she grabs you tightly and stands up. Rey……are you…..trying to kill…..me?! You said. Shut up!!! After everything, EVERYTHING, I did for you. I told you about how I had nobody. You were the one and only person in this world I thought who wouldn’t leave me! She said. I wasn’t……. I would never……. You said through breaths. Then why?!? Why did you say all that to me?!? And so mean?!? For her!?Did you even care about me to begin with?! She said. You can feel her grip on you getting tighter to the point where you can’t breath. (If she…..doesn’t crush me……. she’ll suffocate me.) You thought. Rey…..let me……explain….. You said. Explain what?! That you never gave a care about me?! Just stay with me because I’m so lonely, depressed girl?! Someone to toss away when you find someone better?!? She said. Rey……if…..you don’t loosen……your hold…..you’re…..killing me. You said. And? Maybe that’s what I want to do. It’d be one less horrible person in the world. Maybe killing you will make me happy again. She said. You…..don’t mean……that…… Please……you’ll regret it…….if you kill…..me. You said with your last breath of air. You try to breath in, but can’t with Rey’s tight grip. Your lung start to shrivel and your chest starts to burn. Just when you thought you’d pass out, Rey opens her hand. You gasp in air. Thank *gasps* you……. You said. After a few seconds of heaving, Rey close her hand around you and places her thumb under your chin to make you look her in the eyes. The only reason I didn’t crush you in my hand or suffocate you was to hear what you have to say. And it better be the truth, Tyne. I’m not in the mood for lies right now. She said. I promised you that. You’ll get nothing but the truth. You said.
I would never say those things to, Rey. I only said them because she threaten to kill you if I didn’t. She tried to make me fall out of love with you. She tried to every trick in the book, but I was, and still am, in love with you. I just said those things so she’d quit. You said. What did she do? Rey said. She pushed me inside her, squeezed me between her breast, kissed me, and all that. But I didn’t like it. I have eyes for one lady. And that’s you. You said. Then tell me. Person to person. Would you leave me? She said. Really? You’re asking me that? If I wanted to leave you, I would have left by now. I’d taken my chances in the hot, unkind desert. If I wanted nothing to do with you, I’d run from you the second I first saw you. Do you want to know why I’m still with you? The real reason why I stay with you? You said. I do. Rey said bracing for the worse. I stay with you not because you’re a giant keeping me against my will or some lonely girl in need of companionship. I stay with you because I love you. From sunrise to the cold nights, I love you. Everything about you, I love. The small giggles in your sleep, the animal like yawn in the morning, even your tough attitude. Everything that makes you you, I love. I don’t love that harlot over there, I love the scavenging, tough as they come, yet sweet girl right in front of me. You said. So you wouldn’t leave me for that over there? Even if we have a very bad day with each other? Even if we start to become a nuisance to each other? You’d still stay in love with me? Rey said. Yes. I said what I said so she’d buy it. It had to sound genuine. It had to feel like I did fall out of love with you. Look, if I lost your trust over this, just tell me. I’ll do whatever you want me to do to prove that. I don’t care how demanding or demeaning it is. If I can regain your trust in me, I’ll do it. You said. You’ll go to the ends of Jakku for me? She said. Yes. You said. Rob a powerful hutt? She said. Yes. I said anything. I want you to know that my feeling haven’t change just because of her. So if you want me to prove it, just say so and I’ll do it. You said. Ok. Give me a few minutes. She said. Rey puts you down and ties up Valera. Rey then walks back in and and picks you up.
So you’ll do anything? She said. Whatever you want. Just name it. You said. Ok. I want you to....   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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