You were feeling very relaxed with Fluttershy massaging your back and your really pretty much surprised on hiw well she's doing so far. Especially, with her using only her fingers that are much bigger than you. Guess she has the softest touch, so to speak. That's when Fluttershy stopped for a moment and you looked back to see what's up.
"Why did you-?" You stopped as you see Fluttershy's finger coming down and, gently, petting on your head.
The petting she's doing just as gentle as the massage she did. It made you feeling good on the inside. You looked at Fluttershy's and see that smile again. You don't know why, but every time you see her smile, it made you smile. Regardless, it felt really good and she soon stopped petting you.
"How did you like that, (Your Name)?" Fluttershy asked.
"That was, actually, good and sweet of you. Does that make me one of your pets now?" You joked.
"Why? Do you want to?" Fluttershy asked, knowing that you're joking.
"As long as I don't share a room with Angel." You joked making her laugh a bit.
"Seriously, though. That was very nice of you. I haven't felt like that for....." You stopped as you thought about your mother that divorced your father when you were you younger and made you got a little sad. "......a long time." You said, softly.
"What wrong, (Your Name)?" Fluttershy wondered noticing your sad face.
"It's just that your treatment just kinda reminds me of how my mother treats me when I was little. She used to read stories with me, we bake together, she helped me with homework after school and she gives me a nice rub on my back before I go to sleep." You said.
"She must be a very nice woman to have as a mother." Fluttershy said.
"She is. But, like I told you before, my mother divorced my father when I was 10. When she left, a big part of my life went with her. After that, everything else fell apart." You said sadly.
"Did your father did something to make her leave?" Fluttershy wondered.
"Well, I guess that he was a jerk to her and they fight a lot. But, he soon regretted it and he wished he could have her back. But, when I looked at him, I can tell that it was too late for him and he's been in misery ever since." You said.
"Do you miss her?" Fluttershy asked.
"A lot. I miss her so much." You said with a tear going down your face.
Fluttershy felt her heart broke a bit when she saw that tear. She wished that she could cheer you up. That's when she had an idea that can.
"I know something that can make you feel better." Fluttershy said.
"You do?" You asked wiping the tear off of your face.
"First, cover your eyes." Fluttershy said.
"Uh, okay." You said in confusion. But, you did so anyway.
As you kept your eyes closed, you soon felt something soft on you and you don't know what is.
"Fluttershy? What's that on me? Can I look now?" You asked with your eyes still closed.
She didn't say anything. So, you decided to take a peek. You, slowly, opened you eyes to look to see what it is. Your eyes were then shot wide as you see Fluttershy   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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