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Chapter #25

Your New Goat Mother

    by: Lover Of All Giantesses Author IconMail Icon
Okay so this planned turned sour for you real quick. You were escaping this giant goat woman, and now you were trying not to get stepped on by her. If you just stayed on the bed this would not have happened. Maybe you judged her too quickly, maybe she was sweet and kind. She did give off those vibes about her, even though she was a monster. Still that was not important right now, what you could of done. Cause you were small and about to get stepped on her foot.

There was a chance that you could get away, keyword being could. Because you made a mistake that sealed your fate. You tripped.

Running over you own legs as you fall down. About to get done with as you turn and see her giant furry paw. About to come down on you. You raise your arms blocking your sight from your incoming doom as you wait for the step.

It would seem though, the step never came. Not once, as you see her aware. She talked to you and announced.

“So... do you see the problem here?” She questioned as you were left stunned. She moved one of her feet to the side, letting you see her giant face above you. Her giant frame dwarfing yours. She put her foot down and crossed her arms over her admittedly giant breasts.

“I uh... What?” You say as you were left confused.

“Do you see the problem you created here child” She said to you as you were a bit confused. Child? Your considered an adult where you from.

“Uh... not really”

“Good lord child, i almost stepped on you. If i wasn’t so aware i very might of” She said to you. She brought her hand down and brought it to you. You could do nothing as she reached for you. Grabbing you and then pulling you up to her face. Her palm under you as she was cupping you. Making sure you wouldn’t fall “You really need to be more careful. With your size, you need to be careful!”

“I... was doing... something?” You say to her as you didn’t really finish the words. She walked over back into the room and sat down. her legs closed as she still had you cupped. You were level with her breasts and you must admit, you see it.

“That doesn’t change the fact of what might have happened” She said to you “You need to be more careful. No being on the floor unless it is under strict supervision”

Okay, this goat woman is acting like your mother. You were a bit confused about this and you would speak up about it but... hell she seems nice enough. Your gonna do it. “Uh... i’m a grown man. I can do what i want, even if it is stupid and dangerous. And... i’m sorry but i don’t even know you? So you can’t really tell me what to do?”

You wait for a second to see if she was going to be angry about this, and well she wasn’t. She was... strict though.

“It’s that kind of narrow minded thinking that will finish you off, and until you see your mistake, i will have to put you in timeout”

“Time out?” You question as she moved around. moving over and grabbing a cup that was on the nearby nightstand. She wore a smile as she pulled you over and put you in the middle. You get dropped right onto the glass as you look at the giant walls. “Come on!”

“I cannot let you out, not until you see your fault child. It is what a good mother does” She said as you were left confused at this goat woman.

Funny, she was acting like your mother and truth be told, you were acting like a child. As you shift around, get onto your rear and turn away from her.

“Don’t pout” She said as you didn’t respond, or even look at you. “If you want to do this i must worn you child. I can handle this better then you”

Well now it was a competition. Whoever will break first. Your sure she will see her fault and be kind. Maybe it isn’t the best messing with a goat monster, but she seems to care.... a bit.

After about ten minutes you calmed down, neither of you talking. You were not gonna get out of this cup and... well it was stupid. If she didn’t spot you, you wouldn’t of been alive at the moment. You have to do this.

Getting up, you turn to her. The giant goat mother watching.

“I’m sorry” You say to her “Guess it was stupid. Can we start over?”

“Yes. I would like that child” She said to you, happy you saw your faults. She moved her hand around and touched her chest “My name is Toriel. I live here, and look after anyone who passes in the Underground”

“Right... Uh my name is (Your Name). And i fell down a hole?”

“From the surface world” She said to you, speaking up “Quite the fall. Of course i would bring you here and take care of you. You are... much smaller then the others, therefore in need of help”

“Right... thank you” You say to her “Well, can you get me back up to the... surface world?” You say to her as she shakes her head.

“No, but i can take care of you” She said back to you “And i will. I will take care of you”

“Right...” You say to her as you then speak a bit meekly to her “I... what if I don’t want to be in your care”

“Hehe, silly child. You may feel like that, but don’t worry. You will learn to embrace my love. A Mother’s love” She said, her eyes sparkling as you were a bit worried.

“I... see the problem here” You say as this was not good.

What does Toriel do next?

You have the following choices:

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1. she punishes you more directly

2. She just gives you a warning

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3. She can brush it off

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