Chapter #33Found by Derpy by: irven   You decide that the best course of action would be to get the pony’s attention. Chances are, she won’t hurt you, and she’ll probably be able to help you in this strange situation. So you take a deep breath and start shouting, “Hey! Down here!”
Derpy’s ears perk up and tilt around. She hovers in place and scans her surroundings, seemingly aiming her eyes in different directions like a chameleon. It’s simultaneously funny-looking and kind of creepy.
“Huh? Who said that?” she asks.
“In the grass!” you shout, jumping up and down and waving your arms.
Derpy finally looks down at you, and both her eyes actually aim properly to focus on you. It only lasts a moment before one eye starts drifting away like usual, but she was able to focus long enough to see you clearly, causing her to gasp in surprise. She softly descends to the ground, making sure to avoid landing on you, then leans her head down to investigate the tiny thing in the grass.
You shudder as the enormous equine’s head fills most of your vision. You can get a better idea of the scale you’re at now, and it feels like your whole body is even smaller than one of her eyes. Speaking of which, you can tell she’s trying to focus on you with both eyes, since her lazy eye isn’t drifting nearly as much as usual right now. She must be doing that to see your tiny form more easily.
“Um... well, hello, little guy!” the pegasus says with a smile. Her voice is quite loud, and you wince, but she notices this and quiets down. “Sorry. I’ll try to remember to whisper.”
“Thanks,” you reply. “And... h-hello to you too. C-can you tell me where I am?”
“You’re in Ponyville!” Derpy says. “In the park, actually.”
That isn’t surprising. You thought those buildings in the distance looked familiar—they do look like the Ponyville buildings you remember from the show.
“Are you new here?” Derpy asks. But then she grimaces slightly and adds, “Oh, whoops—dumb question. I’ve never seen a creature like you, and you don’t even know where you are, so you MUST be new here. My bad.”
“Yeah, about that... I just woke up here. I don’t know how I got here. Also... I’m pretty sure I shrunk somehow.”
“Really?” the pony gasps. You flinch a bit as her mouth opens wide in shock—at this size, she could easily fit you in her mouth (but you hope she won’t try that, since she’s an herbivore). “That’s real weird... I heard Applejack shrunk once when she walked in some poison joke. Did you get into any of that lately?”
“No. I seriously don’t know how this happened. But I’m definitely in danger at this size—I mean, I could easily get eaten or squished like this. So... do you think you could help me out?” | Members who added to this interactive story also contributed to these: |
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