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As Marco walked through Jackie's nasal cavity, he tried to step as gently as he could so as not to irritate Jackie's sinuses and make her sneeze. But even with his softest footsteps, Jackie could still feel a slight tickle in her nose.
Poor Marco Diaz thought he had it bad enough when Jackie nearly ate him with her nachos. But now, he had to deal with the long hairs inside her nostrils as well as the disgusting puddles of her mucus that grew from of every corner of the fleshy tunnel. Marco just hoped that he'd be able to recover from such a degrading experience.
While Marco was dragging his feet in Jackie's nose, the beautiful teen was looking for her little date in the bathroom. "Marco? Are you in here?" She grew confused when she saw no trace of him anywhere. "Okay, mini Marco. If you wanted to play hide and seek now, you should've-"
Jackie was suddenly pulled from her thoughts once she felt a slight twinge in her nose. It was just a small tickle, but it was still irritating enough to bother her a bit. She tried to sniffle it away to get rid of it, which resulted in Marco being pulled back from the sudden wind from Jackie's inhaling.
Marco fell on his back and Jackie felt it as the tickling was getting worse. "Uh oh. This can't be good," Marco panicked. He began to panic as the fleshy tunnel was beginning to rumble around him. Marco realized that Jackie was on the brink of sneezing him out, so he tried to stay put to make it stop. He was just lucky that he stopped moving when he did or else Jackie would've launched him out of her nose and probably onto a hard landing.
The rumbling began to die down as Marco relaxed. Jackie felt her sinuses settling as a result and breathed a sigh of relief when she heard a knock on her door. "Coming! I'll be right there." Jackie then went to answer the door.
However, her movement made it much more difficult for Marco to keep his balance and he ended up tumbling further down Jackie's nostril. Jackie felt her nose twitching again as she got closer to her front door. "Oh come on, not again!" she exclaimed in annoyance.
She tried to sniffle again and ended up stopping Marco's descent. Unfortunately, Marco stopped in his tracks only to land feet-first in a snot puddle. "Oh man! These are my best shoes! NASTY!" Marco complained in disgust. He tried shaking the mucus off of his shoes, but quickly realized that he was only making the problem worse. "Oh no." Marco ended up throwing the mucus all over the walls of the tunnel while also shaking a nearby nosehair. That was when Jackie finally hit her breaking point and was ready to let a sneeze out, and him along with it.
Jackie could a sneeze coming on just as she opened the door to see who her next guest was. The moment she opened the door, Jackie was met with the sight of...
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