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Marco Diaz gets shrunken while surrounded by the "BIG" girls in his life.

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Chapter #8

Marco is inhaled into Jackie's lungs.

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As Marco walked through Jackie's nasal cavity, he tried to step as gently as he could so as not to irritate Jackie's sinuses. But even with his softest footsteps, Jackie could still feel a slight tickle in her nose.

Poor Marco Diaz thought he had it bad enough when Jackie nearly ate him with her nachos. But now, he had to deal with the long hairs inside her nostrils as well as the disgusting puddles of her mucus that grew from of every corner of the fleshy tunnel.

While Marco was dragging his feet in Jackie's nose, the beautiful teen was looking for her little date in the bathroom. "Marco? Are you in here?" She grew confused when she saw no trace of him anywhere. "Okay, mini Marco. If you wanted to play hide and seek now, you should've-"

Jackie was suddenly pulled from her thoughts once she felt a slight twinge in her nose. It was just a small tickle, but it was still irritating enough to bother her a bit. She tried to sniffle it away to get rid of it, which resulted in Marco being pulled back from the sudden wind from Jackie's inhaling.

Marco fell on his back and Jackie felt it as the tickling was getting worse. "Uh oh. This can't be good," Marco panicked. He began to panic as the fleshy tunnel was beginning to rumble around him. Marco realized that Jackie was on the brink of sneezing him out, so he tried to stay put to make it stop. He was just lucky that he stopped moving when he did or else Jackie would've launched him out of her nose and probably onto a hard landing.

However, even though Marco stopped moving, Jackie could still feel her nose being irritated and grew annoyed by it. It was then that Jackie took a really big sniff through her nose and managed to get rid of her itch. This resulted in even more problems for the tiny boy in her nose.

Jackie inhaled heavily through her nose and Marco was trapped in it. The wind from the opening of her nostrils was like a hurricane and he grabbed onto a nosehair to hold on for dear life. Unfortunately, the force from the wind was so strong that Marco instantly lost his grip on the hair and was sucked back to the front of Jackie's nasal cavity.

Marco screamed as he was pulled through the fleshy tunnel right back where he started. As soon as Marco reached the back of Jackie's nose, he saw her mouth under him again and worried that he was finally going to fall down her throat. But in this case, the wind pulled him in a different direction, on that wasn't as bad as the stomach, but was still dangerous nonetheless.

Remembering what he learned in biology class, Marco realized where he was headed. Instead of going down Jackie's esophagus, the entrance to her larynx was wide open, allowing Marco to get pulled through it with the air. To his horror, Marco instantly fell through the big hole of Jackie's vocal cords and plummeted down her trachea.

Pretty soon, Marco fell all the way down Jackie's trachea and ended up in one of her lungs. Marco's 'ride' came to an abrupt stop as the wind cushioned his landing, allowing him to land onto the soft, fleshy surface of Jackie's lung.

"Whoa! What a rush that was!" Marco said, standing up. "Wow. I'm inside Jackie's lungs!" He looked around and noticed her lungs pulsating and growing as air flowed into all of the holes on the walls. By now, Marco was starting to wish he was back in the nose, or just back to normal size and out of her.

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