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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Thriller/Suspense · #2261153

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Chapter #5

Adric eats the entire bar (and Derek)

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No matter how much distance he crossed, he was still far too small to go anywhere, so Derek soon saw the immense pearly whites fly by beyond him, his brother's breath washing over him as he entered his cavernous mouth.

Adric wanted to taunt Marco on having the last bar, so he shoved all of it in one go to not have he to share it, leaving his Latino friend envious as he chewed on the tasty sweet. He was completely oblivious to the fact this was causing hell for his brother.

Derek could already see the chocolate melting from the heat when the giant kid shoved it inside his mouth, but the teeth and saliva were tearing it apart, his tongue moving from time to time sending the speck of a person on top of the bar slouching around. He tried to cry for help but it was futile, and his body was too small to be felt around the mouth, so it went equally unnoticed when his younger brother swallowed down, sending him by the abyss of his throat.

Adric hummed as he ate his chocolate bar, even showing off his tongue to Marco as a sign of victory, but he would never know said short moment of ego had costed his older brother's life.

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