This choice: And I'm going to eat you. • Go Back...Chapter #6And I'm going to eat you. by: jdoe11   Your blood ran cold.
It's funny. When you came into this store, and the store girl had warned you about the risk of being eaten, you had mostly just brushed it off. You figured the chances were pretty low since as far as you knew most owners preferred to use their tinies over a long period of time, not immediately dispose of them. At least, you had never seen your sister Hayley eat a tiny. And you figured that even if it did happen, there was some small part of you that wouldn't mind being swallowed by a babe like Brianna.
But now, in the actual Gigantic face of this inescapable reality, you were completely frozen in fear. Unable to comprehend how you could possibly escape the hot, wet torturous cavern in front of you.
Noticing your terror, Brianna's eyes lit up and she let out a light giggle. "Aw what's that look? Ooh yeah, you're gonna be eaten! I'm gonna put you in my warm mouth, roll you around on my tongue..."
The massive pink wet serpent slithered out from between her lips, covered your entire lower half and dragged its way deliberately up your body and over your face, ensuring that you couldn't breath for a few seconds.
"Mmmmmm... and then once I've gotten all the flavor out of you, I'll send you right down my warm tight throat so you can go live in my tummy where you belong!" She whispered while her other hand made its way down her chest and lightly rubber her flat stomach."
Still frozen in terror, you could only flail helplessly between her fingers as they brought you deeper and deeper into her gaping maw.
As you approached her wet waiting tongue, you turned to try to cling onto her gigantic slender finger as a last ditch effort to escape your horrifying fate. But she easily flicked you off, sending you plummeting down onto the middle of her lightly undulating, slick tongue. All attempts at escape were proven pointless as you slipped and slid on the slimy surface, and you were forced to watch in terror as the back of Brianna's massive lips and teeth closed off your only exit.
The second darkness took hold the humid cavern became a deadly wash cycle. Brianna's powerful tongue lifted you up and slammed you into the rigid roof of the smelly wet cavern, and you could feel all of your limbs being pulled in separate directions as Brianna mercilessly sucked on your pathetic body like a delicious hard candy.
Unable to breath for what felt like an eternity, you were finally released from your compression and suction torture before her massive tongue whipped out from under you and crushed you down into the soft tissue of the bottom of her mouth, completely pinning you under her soft tongue.
As horrifying and hopeless as your situation was, you at least found some small respite in escaping the hard roof of her mouth for this soft squishy embrace. But the comfort didn't last long as you started to notice the cavern filling with saliva. The sticky substance seemed to be coming from every direction, eager to assist in the devouring of its new prey.
Panic set in as you became painfully aware that you would not be able to escape the terrible fate of drowning in your ex's spit, pinned down beneath the surface by her merciless tongue.
"Don't do this!" You started to scream between breaths of humid cavern air while you struggled against the tongue trying to push you under. "Please!..... Please Don't Eat Me!....I promise I'l be an obedient slave!... Just please not this!.... Please!"
Your cries went unanswered and your last bit of hope drained away as her tongue slowly but deliberately began to prod your struggling body toward the back of her throat.
Just as you were sure you were about to be stuffed into her tight esophagus to begin the final journey to her broiling stomach below, the muffled voice of an angel reached your ears.
"Brianna! Spit that tiny out."
I'm Saved!!! you thought trembling with joy at being spared this horrible fate which you now know you wouldn't even wish on your worst enemies.
"You know you need to buy it first. Then you can take it home and do whatever messed up stuff you want to it."
The devil works in mysterious ways was your next thought as despair at your delayed yet seemingly unavoidable devouring set in.
Finally light and fresh cool air that you thought you would never see again washed over you, Brianna spit you unceremoniously into her open palm. You lied trembling in Brianna's palm and worked to rub her sticky saliva out of your eyes to see the blonde store girl standing next to Brianna.
"Geeze Mady I know I know! I was just teasing this tiny a little bit. I think I used to know it when it before it was a bug. Figured it looked tasty and who wouldn't want to eat their ex if given the chance."
"Oof sucks to suck for him. You usually come here for toys don't you?" Mady peered down at you curiously and burst out laughing!
"Oh my God THAT GUY!!?? HAHAHA You know he literally came in here ASKING to be shrunk just this morning! IDIOT! I TOLD YOU this could happen. And now you actually are getting eaten. But at least it's by this babe." She couldn't contain her laughter as she mocked you for what you now are already painfully aware was the worst decision of your life.
"Wait wait wait" Brianna cut in, "You ASKED to be a tiny? Do you actually want me to eat you!?"
You tried with all your might to open your mouth and scream "NO! I NEVER WANT TO BE ANYWHERE NEAR THAT PLACE AGAIN! PLEASE HELP ME!" but when you did the fresh saliva coating your entire body slipped into your mouth causing you to splutter and cough instead.
Brianna must have taken the non-response as a submissive yes because she rolled her eyes and groaned.   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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