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You will be following the story of tiny but durable Tim throughout his life.

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Chapter #6

A Rite of Passage

    by: Kentwolf Author IconMail Icon
The next few minutes were the longest of your life. You had a fear of being forgotten and left like this that doubled in intensity with every passing second. Thoughts of being mixed in with the real tinex items until your heart tattoo faded and you were never found, used by the staff of this spa for years and years by countless women. Thankfully for you, you heard your mother walk back in after a couple of minutes, just as the staff member was picking your folded body up off of the bench.

“oh, your co-worker said my..husband was in here? I can’t forget him.” She said cheerfully. Ellen was confused when the woman handed her an oiled up cloth, until she unfolded it and saw the little heart tattoo in its centre. Her cheeks blushed bright red realising how this cloth, her son, had been rubbed over her entire body. Clearly it must be a way for couples to be more intimate, she rationalised. She assumed you had agreed to it, likely having been told what to expect while she got settled.

“Oh, um, thank you. He looks very well massaged. I best take him back to the room to recover though.” She said with an embarrassed chuckle. As she carried you out, she lifted you close to her mouth and whispered.
“Sorry sweetie, I didn’t expect the couples massage to be so intimate. Thank you for not backing out though, I feel so relaxed.” She stroked your supple, cloth like body. It was humiliating, but at least your mother was enjoying herself. That was the main goal of this trip after all, she deserved this relaxing holiday.

When she got back to your room, she gently laid you down on the bedside table, placing a pillow under you so you are resting on something soft and yawns.

“I’m going to have a nap sweetie, that massage really relaxed me. Enjoy reforming while I sleep” She said mid yawn as she climbed into the bed and snuggled under the covers. By the sounds of it, she was out like a light within a minute of her head hitting the pillow. At least she hadn’t rested you on the bed, so you had plenty of time to focus on reforming, though it would be slow going as you were very firmly mashed into your cloth like shape.

You focused for hours, though you were also quite tired after the torment you had been put through, so eventually drifted off. For once in your life, luck seemed to be on your side though, as your mother and you both slept all the way through the rest of the day and night, awaking just as your mother began to stir. You placed a hand to your head before pausing and grinning, you had hands! You had a head. You were reformed on the pillow. Most of the oil had been soaked into your skin by now, but you still had a slight sheen to your skin.

“Mmm, morning sweetie.” Your mother said with a sleepy yawn. She looked very well rested as she stretched.
“Ooh did I need that sleep. I feel like a million bucks. Did you enjoy your massage too?” She asked. You of course had hated every moment of it, but felt it important to keep your mother enjoying her trip after all this.

“Yeah it was great. The Oils were really soothing and um, the woman’s hands were very firm” You replied, blushing with a little cough. Neither of you mentioned how you had been used during that massage. But once she was dressed, the two of you headed down to get some breakfast from the Spa’s restaurant. All in all it was a nice breakfast, right up until your mother overheard some other women on a nearby table chatting to each other about a great full body cleanse. You listened as she asked them about it and heard that the staff put something in her mouth weighted down, letting it slide through the woman’s body until it came out the other end the next day or that evening. Then they inflated the other end tied to a tooth, sliding it through and cleansing the entire inner body.

To you that sounded horrible, the tiny men at the women’s table looked traumatised for some reason and you suspected you knew what object was being passed through the women’s bodies. However, your mother thought it sounded fascinating and eagerly began saying that she had to try it. You tried to protest, explaining your suspicions of how it was done, but she didn’t hear you as she excitedly talked over you. In seconds you were scooped up and being carried off towards the area the women had mentioned, a deep feeling of dread growing inside you.

“Hello, I’m Ellen Gibbson and this is my little husband, Paul. We are interested in the full body cleanse please.” Your mother said eagerly to the woman at the desk, who smiled and glanced at you, seeing your fear and nerves, before turning back to your mother.

“Certainly, let me just take your tiny and we can get him prepared while you get settled. It is a long process and you will be able to enjoy your day, you’ll barely notice its taking place.” You understood what she meant with that wording now, but the woman gripped you too tightly to verbalise your protest to your mother. All you could do was watch as she sat down in a chair while the woman took you over to a small alcove.

You opened your mouth to tell the woman to stop, that was your first mistake. Like a viper, her fingers shot out and grabbed your tongue the moment you opened your mouth, then she stretched it out and tied it around a thin wire connected to a small weight. Well the weight was small for a normal person, to you it was like having a house connected to your tongue. She expertly stripped you out of your clothing, humming to herself and once again a staff member was treating you like an object to be shaped into use rather than a person. She connected a small metal loop to your penis and you caught the faintest of satisfied smirks on her lips as she did so.

With that done and you in pain at both ends, she rolled you between her fingers until your flattened out like a sausage made of putty. She checked you over, before nodding to herself and walked back to your mother.

“Alright Miss, I’m going to loop this around your back tooth to anchor it. It will feel uncomfortable for a few minutes but you will get used to it and forget its even there. When I put it in, I need you to gulp until the small weight gets swallowed. We can rinse it down with a glass of wine if you like. Then it will slowly work its way through your body.” She explained calmly to your mother, who opened her mouth and tilted her head back.

As the woman moved you into your mothers mouth, you felt the warm moisture of her breath cover your squished up skin. You felt a painful tug as she looped the anchor around one of your mothers back teeth, tugging on your captive penis. Then the world went dark as she removed her fingers and your Mom closed her mouth. You were covered in saliva as she gulped a few times, shifting the weight back towards her throat. You whimpered mutely as you felt it tilt and then drop as it began to slide down her throat. Instantly your body was pulled taut, painfully between tongue and tackle, before slowly your body began to stretch. In agonising discomfort, you felt your head slowly sliding down your mothers wet, warm and tight throat, pulling your body longer and longer.

You could do nothing, you had no hope of reforming with your misshapen body being stretched constantly. The sounds of the outside world vanished as you could only hear the gurgling of the inner workings of the human body. The boom of her heartbeat, the pulse of her muscles in constant motion.

Ellen gulped a few times, then she took the wine that was offered with a smile, taking a healthy gulp of that to wash down the metallic weight. True to the Spa workers word, after a couple of minutes she barely noticed anything, the faint tug on her back tooth was so slight she could ignore it and the weight had slid past her throat and she couldn’t feel it anymore. She listened to the staffs instructions, being told to check if it had come out by the end of the day, but if she didn’t notice it by the time she retired for the night, there was no harm in waiting for the morning.

“And where is my husband, so I can go have lunch with him?” Ellen asked the woman, who blinked and then chuckled.

“Well the cleansing process is just as long for a tiny but its a bit different, you probably won’t see him until its done.” She replied with a light chuckle. Ellen blinked and then rolled her eyes.

“Oh of course, the process is probably a lot more invasive for someone his size. Well I will come collect him when it’s over then, I hope he enjoys himself.” She said, seeing this made the woman smile more, before she left to go occupy herself for the day.

Inside her stomach, you felt the burning of the stomach acid, though you knew from experience it wouldn’t kill you, it still was an experience that you never wanted to face again. It sloshed around as your mother was moving, eventually your head submerged in the burning fluid, eventually making its way past the stomach and further down. This had to be the worst idea anyone had ever thought up for a tiny to experience. You also realised with horror that when you popped out the other end, they would inflate the bit around the tooth and pull it through the body afterwards. The horrors of this never stopped. All you could hope is that this is the worst the Spa had to offer for you and that there were no issues that would arise while you were going through this process.
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