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| (4.5)  Hi Casey! Guess what popped up on the Read and Review page? Yay! And oh my gosh! A GOT poem! That takes me back to the game. LOLThis is a delightful feast of words. I admire that you created a Sonnet like Shakespeare. I don't think I have managed to do one in a long time! Your form is effective with its format as you described in your note. Excellent model of the form.  It was pleasant to read as a sonnet and the words you use to rhyme are well chosen and interesting. I liked "utopia" and "indiscreet".  It is very unique to have a feast like you describe with blogs, poem, etc. Your vivid descriptions are marvelous too. The images of the heavy plate, the tete a tete being gleeful and the beast are neat.   I think "belly's" in the second verse needs to be plural "bellies".I had to laugh at the Alka Seltzer Line.  Good one!I really admire how the tone and and wording reflected the way of a sonnet and fit with the idea of the Game of Thrones setting. It is really well achieved. I had a good time rereading it and entering into your vision. Thanks for the great read and the memories.  eyestar 
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You responded to this review 02/23/2019 @ 10:34am EST