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 Buzz  [18+]
A Horror Story Involving Realtors and Sex Toys
by Phoenix
Review of Buzz  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, Phoenix!
This is hilarious! Not a lot women would talk about something like this so openly, if at all, but you had no qualms about it and were about as open as you could get! I was laughing so hard I almost fell off my chair!
But at the same time, while you were open about it here, you seem to be a little embarrassed about what the buyers are thinking of you!
Hell, I wouldn't worry about it! It's over and done now, just as long as you didn't leave anything else behind that they might find! *Laugh*
A few tiny niggles in otherwise excellent piece:
'Listen, it(')s not like I'm a hoarder...'
'But not when it(')s time to move.'
'I recieved an email' (received)
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for the laughs, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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