Hi there, Annabelle, and welcome to WdC.
This is a very emotional and sad piece, but I'm glad you were brave enough to write it and share it. Especially for being as young as you are. Believe it or not, writing down our feelings, even if nobody else reads our words, can be very cathartic and help to take the pain away.
I'm so sorry you had to go through a childhood like this, and you have my sympathy. I can only hope that you've managed to overcome it and become a stronger person for it, although nobody should have to endure this type of abuse, whether it's physical or emotional.
As for a critique, as you asked for in your port intro, I thought this was a really good way/style of writing it. It's simple but to the point, and in your own way you might be helping others who've suffered this kind of thing.
Please be strong, my friend! And by the way, if you ever need somebody to talk to, please know that's there's always somebody on here who's willing to listen! Including myself!
Write on and ride on, Annabelle, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PPS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
PPPS-If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page or The Shameless Plug Page under Community on the left hand side.
| You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore