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Penelope? an interesting middle name I wasn't expecting it for Constance. Can I really talk though, it's one of my main's first name, everybody calls her Neely though. I like the electricity between Constance and silverbolt. There is definite chemistry. the one thing that rang out to me as inconsistent was him flipping the double bird to Constance, it doesn't necessarily have THAT meaning everywhere here on our earth, I doubt that it would have any meaning in Rathmore. A better reaction from them would have been perplexity which gives silverbolt a chance to realize he isn't in Kansas anymore and be deflated that his insult didn't work.

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