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A Day at the Park, With Pie Open in new Window. [18+]
Ruby saves the world with her knitting and homemade pie.
by Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈 Author Icon
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈

This is a nice and interesting story and generally l got jittery going through a long story, not here. I thought the story will be about close encounter with the third kind but to my surprise it was even better and interesting all way till the end. The way you did the story building and created a mysterious aura, all this kept me on my toes. Great summarisation at the end. Sure l will give time to the literature's here... sindbad

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