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 My First Fight Open in new Window. [18+]
A young black girl experiences racism for the first time
by NikNak Author Icon
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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello there! I wanted to come in for a little short visit and as I came in I was happy that I had. I was moved and hurt by how you were done I am sure you and your friend would have had a really good time but at least the teacher cared enough about you and she protected you although I am sure it did not seem like it at that time. People are so ugly and full of hate! Now I know were are two different colors but we are yet the same as the ones you called in here as your people I think and feel that they are my people too! You do not fight alone and I wanted you to know. I was very moved and touched by this piece and I love that you shared this short story. A five-star for sure.

Keep doing all the wonderful things you do, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!

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