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| (4.5)| Greetings Louise Wiggins is Elizabeth  !This is your account anniversary month and I'm here to celebrate it with Anniversary Review. Before I'll proceed with my review, let me say  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"  "Dust on a Golden Shovel" is a very alluring title. I was immediately drawn to read your piece after seeing this. The title alone already convey a very deep meaning and that was what I wanted to uncover. The things I particularly like are the following: Compelling concept: The poem tackles the profound topic of the soul, described as "the eye of God in us," a window into eternity. This instantly engages the reader with its spiritual and philosophical depth. Vivid imagery: The poem uses evocative language to describe the soul as "soft as slowly flowing water," "hard as its surface, transparent," and "slows light almost to visibility." These metaphors provide a tangible sense of the soul's elusive nature. Emotional resonance: The lines about risking the soul in love and despair, along with the repetition of "We live this," effectively convey the weight and importance of our choices and experiences. Thought-provoking ending: The poem leaves the reader pondering the ways we navigate life with our souls, whether "with closed eyes, or open/in darkness, undressed/or in mountain-wrapping fog." Overall, "Dust on a Golden Shovel" is a beautiful and thought-provoking poem that delves into the complexities of the human soul. Its vivid imagery, emotional resonance, and philosophical depth make it a compelling read. You've perfectly executed each line and I enjoyed sailing though each. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!  Best regards, Gervic  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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