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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron House Of Braavos

Title: When The Master Comes Home

Hi Hope: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I love cats. I have a cat so I was drawn to this. I decided to read this and see what this is about. I am here to leave a review and express my views and observations. I read the first stanza and thought okay. I will do this.

What needs your attention: I think that you have got this covered. You get this in order. I see no typos or grammar issues. You did well with this.

What part I liked best: You are very judgmental for a fluffy cat. But don't you want a cuddle? Come for a snuggle, my darling. Curl up and purr near my ear. Some good lines that speak to the reader who loves their pet cat.. I like that you love your cat and seem to know his language. Heart touching. Any poem about cats is a must and as long as they speak positive about the cat, it is good.

Overall Impression: Easy to follow. A good style. Lovely reflections and good sentiments about your kitty. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends them together and rounds this out with a delightful flair.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the readers and do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated within, This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for letting me review your work. It has been my pleasure.