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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: Say What?

Hi Averren: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I saw that this was about a dispute in a marriage or a romance and I get this. I thought I would give this a read. Getting mad at your spouse and not speaking, I get that. I had to read more and see how this pans out and what develops. I am here to give a review and my observations.

What needs your attention: So, getting mad because he called her stupid. I get that. It is hurtful. How long has she not been speaking to him? Did he try to talk after he said it or did they just shut down with each other? Inquiring minds want to know.

What part I liked best: He apologized and got to speaking again, He was going to the movie and not apologize but changed his mind. He figured out that she was still mad about last night. They worked it out and that is always good. People shouldn't stay mad at each other.

Overall Impression: Well rounded characters and good dialogue. The dialogue tells the story. They finally communicated, A good style and creative and realistic conversation about a dispute. Why did he call her stupid in the first place? It has a good ending. Good presentation.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and do not therefore reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or activity being affiliated within. This is the only opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for letting me read your work. It has been my pleasure.