How sweet. They save a fairy and find true love in each other, with a little help from fairy dust. I would think that Talulah and the kids would become fast friends for a while. But eventually, she would fade from reality for them. I wonder if they really think about that night when they are reminiscing about their love. It is a really magical story. I do think the foreshadowing about the special lightning bug isn't necessary I would suggest just letting the story unfold without it. The ending was a little awkward. It does not flow quite right for me. is she cupping her chin when the fairies are dusting them? Then the comment about the anniversary should not be in the same line. And the anniversary tomorrow would not be a case of WAS.