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 Transport Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi SomeKindaWords

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I liked the mixed structure of the stanzas. Each one had a clear structure and style to it, but each was just slightly different from the others, which made it an intriguing read. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this item. Nice work!


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