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 | More Promptly Poetry PPC 5  [13+] More poems for Promptly Poetry, stuffed into this book because I have reached my limit.  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Hello, Ned, aka nordicnoir! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:  I enjoyed reading your "We’ll Tell Everyone We Live in France" poem today. Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end, enjoying every line.MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:  Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with WDC guidelines. I was poking around in your folder, looking for something to review for the Promptly Poetry Review Incentive Challenge and this poem's title caught my eye. I clicked and read your poem and enjoyed it greatly, so I decided to give you a review as a little anniversary gift. Happiest anniversary wishes to you and best wishes on your writing future too! I loved your poem so much. It was fun, lyrical, and full of positive images. I've always thought I'd love to live in, or at least make an extended visit to France, so this poem was just the thing for me to enjoy. If I don't get to France by the time I'm unable to travel, well, I might just tell everyone I live in France myself. I thought the DANSA form worked well with the message of your poem, and I appreciated your explanation of it as I didn't recall the particulars. My favorite line was the "each day we play in the spray on a spree," line. It made me smile  I loved the in line rhyme and the alliteration too. Overall, like the whole of your poem, I thought it was lovely. I thought you did a great job with the prompt for week thirty six of the current round of the Promptly Poetry Challenge (which I clearly haven't gotten to writing my part yet... so extra appreciation for the prompt reminder; my brain can work on it between now and whenever I get around to writing my own poem). I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "We’ll Tell Everyone We Live in France" poem. I appreciated that you included information on the challenge, even though I'm in it with you. I'm far behind in it though. You appear to be right on track. Kudos to you for that!IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!  As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION:  I enjoyed reading your "We’ll Tell Everyone We Live in France" poem, and think you did a fantastic job with it. It's definitely deserving of five stars for the rating. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, during your anniversary month, and always! PWheeler   A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review!  Promptly Poetry Review Incentive Challenge "PPC5 - Review Incentive"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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