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 Dream Big - Do the Right Thing! Open in new Window. [E]
A set of facts so infamous can interrupt our mental & physical sports struggles - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent work, Tim. Most inspirational!

Life is full of tests and challenges. Sticking with a task is needed until we achieve the goal for which we strive.

The rhythm (iambic tetrameter) and rhyme (a-b-a-b) are consistent throughout and well written.

There's not much to add, except WRITE ON!
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