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 I Can't believe You Open in new Window. [E]
Song Lyrics
by Dee Stressed Author Icon
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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These song lyrics are filled with such pathos, such pain. It's well-written and obviously has potential in the world of pop tunes. Seven verses, and one bridge. It seems to have a bit of an Alanis Morissette feel to it. Add a little vocal fry, and you have a Top 40 Hit.
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