Nicely done, Amethyst Angel. I wrote a poem yesterday with a similar theme. Don't know which came first, yours or mine, but I don't guess it matters, since amazing minds think alike.

You maintained your stated rhythm quite well throughout the poem. Unrhymed was also kept in place, and the theme was the focus of your every line.

Relationships are a challenge, horizontally with our fellowmen, and vertically with the Lord. The challenge you underscored in the first four verses. The solution was joyfully displayed in the last verse.

Excellent poetry. You spoke a good word for the Lord. Thank you for sharing this. WRITE ON!

Jay